Kinda like it. What bothers me the most while looking would be the unicorns leg and it being to busy.
The left side of the picture is pretty "open" compared to the right side where everything just seems cramped together. (Tower, hair, etc just gets cut out of the picture). I Would probably widen and heighten the picture, or make everything fit inside the frame somehow.
About the legs...Im no super expert, but i did make a quick redline with my mouse and hope you dont mind. You probably still want to look up a reference picture.
Anyhow, nice painting