Well, it does look good, but the conspiracy i-dot connecting with the other text bothers a little.. try moving "conspiracy" a little lower, or try another font with suitable capital letters! Also you could try to add some 3d depth to "by the sword" part, but really not much! Shading is great as it is!
- Jussi
Edit: Or just take the dot off! That would do the trick, it probably looks just fine without it!