My First Background - Improvements?

Started by .., Sat 27/03/2004 18:23:42

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Sat 27/03/2004 18:23:42 Last Edit: Sat 27/03/2004 18:30:35 by thebroonsfan
This is the first background i've really made,its for a game im working on and features in the opening cutscene.

(Its a hospital  Room)

What do you think? Any improvements? Like the style? Hate It :(

If you want to improve it feel free to and post it back here :P I'll give u credit.

Click here to see it

rtf

#1
Sat 27/03/2004 18:58:02 Last Edit: Sat 27/03/2004 19:03:31 by releasethefrogs
The link is broken, so click here to see it


EDIT:  ok.. nothing works.  Geocities sucks, don't it?  ;)  Just click on the first link and remove the extra http://

anyway...

I like the style.  I think that you could add just a few textures of something to make the surfaces more interesting to the eye, becasue they look a bit bland.  Like the curtain in that back looks a lot like an extra wall.  I think that some pixelized textures could roughen things up a bit.
I fail at art.

InCreator

#2
Sat 27/03/2004 19:43:04
Boring... I'd describe this.
Good material for improving, I'd describe this further.
Good one, I'd probably say when you're really done with this.

Gfunkera

#3
Sat 27/03/2004 20:05:29
Quote from: releasethefrogs on Sat 27/03/2004 18:58:02
The link is broken, so click here to see it

That link worked fine for me.... Good Stuff you may want add a lil' more detail.

Candle

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Sat 27/03/2004 20:56:18
Here is the picture .
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