MAGS : Mourir en mer

Started by Dorcan, Fri 29/11/2002 05:37:15

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Dorcan

Ok. That's my first MAGS game ! (Done in 9 days. I didn't sleep very much)

-----:::   MOURIR EN MER   :::-----

I finaly have made a translation, so I hope you will understand my game now

This game is about a dying guy with an ugly face, who desire to see the sea one time before he dies, but he's imprisoned in the attic by his cruel father...

Changes
3 Jan : New mirror

-TRANSLATION !! (by Rookworm3)
-add some palette effect...and a title
-more conversation
-description of every Hotspot and objects






Download it HERE

(Left-clic, then clic on the last link)

MIRROR

(Right-clic, save as)



jannar85

Noooooooooooooo!!! I want to play!!!
The url didn't work... your host don't like direct-linking...

Oh, and I want to play the english game! :D

The screenshot is quite impressive... It'll have to work for now, untill you have your link ready :D
Veteran, writer... with loads of unreleased games. Work in progress.

Dorcan

I think it works.

When you clic on the link, a new page appear with 3 links in it, you have to clic on the last one : "Click here to get the file you were trying to download."

jannar85

Allright!

Great game, except from it being French...
Many cool animations, but I couldn't get a word of what he said...
So I didn't finish it. I've got all those inventory items...what should I do?
Veteran, writer... with loads of unreleased games. Work in progress.

Gilbert

Hmmm I only get:

QuoteWe are sorry, but the file you are trying to download is larger than the maximum length permitted under current network conditions. Please try again later when network conditions change. The file you were trying to download was 933238 bytes.

Snake

Make it in english, you Dork!11!

Great screenshot, I'll wait for the english version, though ;)


--Snake
Grim: "You're making me want to quit smoking... stop it!;)"
miguel: "I second Grim, stop this nonsense! I love my cigarettes!"

Squinky

Yes, the screenshot looks excellent, and I'm dying to play it.....But I know I'll be dissapointed when I can't even understand it....

Goldmund

It's wonderful, and from the little french I can understand, very moving and serious (I always thought that MAGS is a humorous competition, he he <-example of humorous response).
I would love it if somebody translated it... the intro with the book is great... the game is very sad... and I'm stuck:
Spoiler
I'm already outside and have the mousetrap... I think I need the mouse to scare the clerk at Fast Food and get the mobile phone, but I cannot place the mousetrap back at home - I think I need a bait (hamburger) but how to obtain it?
[close]

The only downside is the lack of "look" messages and I found a bug: you can get the bedsheet repeatedly when clicking at the wardrobe... anyway I really like it, congratulations, Dorcan, another quality release! You grow to be one of my favourite designers here ;-)
And I also love Moby Dick...

Dorcan

#8
Yop Thanks Goldmund for your comment!! I appreciate it very much!!

Too bad I haden't time to post a reply 3 hours ago, because I already have fixed this prob of lack of "look" message !! I had time to finish the game completely today, so for everybody :

I think it would be a good Idea to download the game again hehe
-more conversation
-description of every Hotspot and objects
-fixed some minor bugs (I have fixed the bug with the bedsheet now, thanks !)

And I'm working on a translation, but you will be disapointed, I'm very bad in english

Spoiler
Well, you have to find a piece of cheese... somewere...
if you don't find it, look at te spoiler below :
[close]
Spoiler
It's in the dustbin, in front of the House
[close]

thanks again !

Squinky

I won't be dissapointed with your english, you should be proud that you know so much english in the first place...Now my dopey ass dosen't speak any languages besides my native tongue...

I am really looking forward to the englished up version, man...

Dorcan

OOOK ! Finally, I made it.
I made a translation !! Look at the first post !

Timosity

#11
I've been waiting for the English release, the game looks good and the puzzles seem challenging, I've only had a short go, and I haven't escaped the room yet so I guess I haven't even solved the first puzzle yet.

The main character looks almost identical to Michael Jackson, this might have been what he was treated like as a kid???
Spoiler
I have used the hacksaw on the bars, and pushed the bar but cant open the window, it's sealed.
btw when you've used the hacksaw, and put the tools back, get the tools again you have 2 hacksaws, well one is broken,
I've also used the dummy under the sheets so dad thinks i'm there, I just can't get out of the room, I must have missed something
[close]

Dorcan

#12
Thanks Timosity for your comments, and your bugs report.

I have fixed the bugs now ! You can download it again, and still use your savegame.

Spoiler
First, the message when you interact with the window was an old one, I forgot to change it. Now it's done!
He says : "No, I can't jump from here! It's to high !".

You have to make something that will help you to go down.
See next tip if you don't know how
[close]
Spoiler
You have to make a rope with the bedsheet.
[close]

Trapezoid

Quote from: Timosity on Sun 01/12/2002 12:45:22The main character looks almost identical to Michael Jackson, this might have been what he was treated like as a kid???

Believe it or not, Michael Jackson used to look like a normal black kid (yes, black!) There was some horrible accident where he got covered in acid or something and now Batman's got his eye on him.

rookworm3

Wow. this is really fantastic. Reminds me of my childhood.

Spoiler
Okay, so how do you make a rope out of the bedsheet-- I have tried using the scissors on it and also tried using it on the broken mirror?
[close]

Dorcan


Your childhood, he ?? lol

Spoiler
It's a bit hard trying to cut a bedsheet with a broken mirror... Wouldn't it be easier with a Piece of mirror ?
Can't find how ? Look below
[close]

Spoiler
There is an object called "Piece of mirror", on the broken mirror. Use your scissors on it.
[close]

rookworm3

Just finished it-- really cool game. However, there is a bug:

Spoiler
I use the cell phone; the controller does not answer; I exit the restaurant, click on the train station, then we see the phone ringing, then the screen switches back to the restaurant, and you can converse with the controller, after which the character reappears in the restaurant
[close]

Oh, and I am touching up the translation file.  If you want it, I can send it to you. I can also reword some of the expressions that are slightly awkward if you like.

Dorcan

OF COURSE I WANT IT!!!
That would be very cool.
Please send the file at dorcan@freesurf.ch

BUG FIXED !

Timosity

#18
Quote from: Trapezoid on Sun 01/12/2002 17:25:27Believe it or not, Michael Jackson used to look like a normal black kid (yes, black!) There was some horrible accident where he got covered in acid or something and now Batman's got his eye on him.

Yeah, maybe Dorcan can make yet another remake of the game, with the main character being what Michael Jackson would look like today without surgery, Then cat women might have her eye on him.

Dorcan, I finished the game, It's a great game, I look forward to seeing more from you in the future

DORCAN: Important, I noticed rookworm3 found the bug with the phone and you fixed the bug So I downloaded the new version and the game starts in the fast food place. You've obviously uploaded the version you were testing without resetting the start room and starting inventory

Trapezoid


Dorcan

Voilà  voilà 

Thanks Timosity !!! That was a terrible mistake !

Now, the transitions are working perfectly, and I added some palette effects, and a cool title wouaaah

Ok, I hope there is no more bugs (haha)! Download it ! Now !

Trapezoid

#21
Ok, I have a problem.
If I pick up the dressmaker's dummy, then open the box, I can't put the dummy back down. If I try to go into the inventory, the main character says something in french and the inventory doesn't open.

EDIT: This is more of a bug actually. I figured out how to get past it, but the problem's still there for someone who doesn't know what to do.

Dorcan

I fixed this translation problem. He says : "I must first put this dressmaker's dummy somewhere intelligent !" when you try to open the inventory while you are carying this dummy.

It's just that a dummy can't be put in a pocket. And if you clic on "box" he should put it back. There wasn't any prob for me i think...

Dorcan

Thanks to Rookworm3,  I now have a good english translation !!!!

If you already have downloaded the game, just take this file :
http://dorcan.web1000.com/fichiers/english.tra

Barcik

#24
Done! Very good game! I can't wait to see your first game outside MAGS. Translation isn't perfect (also I saw two sentances in French) but understandable (is there even such a word?). Nice job, and surely gets my MAGS vote (big surprise, huh?).
Oh, and what does the title mean?
Currently Working On: Monkey Island 1.5

Dorcan


Barcik

Ok, thanks. Now set the rules for the new MAGS!
Currently Working On: Monkey Island 1.5

petaglair

merde un concurrent serieux dans la catégorie jeu en français


je vais pas me laisser faire :)

i WILL finish my game
and i will try yours ....as soon as i make some free space in my hdd

Pétaglair
Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

2ma2

Awright, I've played it and finished it now.

A great game. The atmosphere was touching and disturbing. Very very nice. THe slight comical features in the latrer part of the game didn't fit that well into it, but the end took it back to the old feelings. It seems like you've started out to make a one-room game but added more things to it :)

Anyho', the graphics are nice. The outdoor focus was a nice idea, but I thought it didn't work that well. Beautiful anims, but using the same over and over got a bit tedious in the end.

The intro was a filmic masterpiece in it's simplicity. Very very very very good in other words. Puzzles we're nice, but you had a bit of pixelhunting there which was slightly annoying ;). Apart from that, a completely kickass product!

Four thumbs up!

Moynusfrey

I keep trying to download your game, but all I get is:

QuoteWe are sorry, but the file you are trying to download is larger than the maximum length permitted under current network conditions. Please try again later when network conditions change. The file you were trying to download was 981882 bytes.

Je me désole... :'(

Can't wait to try it out!

M.

Esseb

I finished it two days ago and I must say it's absolutely marvellous. Easily one of the most captivating ags games yet. It's a tad short, but since it was for MAGS I can't really hold that against it.

Great job Dorcan.

People, if you haven't tried this yet, download it immediately.

petaglair

Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

Moynusfrey

OK, I did get using another browswer. I guess maybe there is something wrong with my version of Opera...

Great game! It was  real pleasure to play. Thanks!

M.

AGA

Moynusfrey, it was nothing to do with Opera. It meant that his hourly (or daily) bandwidth maximum had been exceeded. Because you waited awhile, it became available for download again.

Dorcan

Petaglaire :
Quotemerde un concurrent serieux dans la catégorie jeu en français
je vais pas me laisser faire
Mouahahahaa !!! Tu ne m'arrives pas à  la cheville !!
Quote"To die in the sea" I sink...  
Hehe


2ma2: Thanks a lot for your comments, they made me feel better
QuoteIt seems like you've started out to make a one-room game but added more things to it
I took a long time to make the first room, then I realized that there was'nt much time left for the other rooms...


Esseb: Hey tanks !
QuoteEasily one of the most captivating ags games yet.
Are you serious ?!!!


Moynusfrey : Cool ! It was a real pleasure to make it !


AGA : Mmh... Web1000 isn't supposed to include a maximum bandwith... Strange...

petaglair

mon jeu avance à  pas de fourmis mais il avance ce sera un jeu plutot long et dur à  finir....pour moi mais pour le joueur potentiel aussi

la translation selon vecteur cul:
My game advance at step of ant but he advances it go be one game rather long and hard at to finish...pro me pero pro el jogador providenciãl also


Pétaglair
Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

Dorcan

#36
Just wanted to say that finally, I have added my first game (A Day In The Future) in the AGS games page...
(I didn't want to start a new topic for that game, because I already had released it months ago, and it's still the same version...)
It's in french & english.

screenshot: http://www.dorcan.web1000.com/fichiers/aditf_screenshot.gif

You can download it here
or look at the AGS short games page

Matt Brown

hmm...manny (my pal who knows you) said this was a good game, but it was sad. I guess I'll try iy
word up

Volcan

Quote from: petaglair on Tue 10/12/2002 08:07:50mon jeu avance à  pas de fourmis mais il avance ce sera un jeu plutot long et dur à  finir....pour moi mais pour le joueur potentiel aussi

la translation selon vecteur cul:
My game advance at step of ant but he advances it go be one game rather long and hard at to finish...pro me pero pro el jogador providenciãl also


Pétaglair

To Pétaglair: j'espère que j'aurai pas à  télécharger ton jeu complet à  40 megs comme c'est le cas avec King's Quest 2 de Tierra.

C'est que j'ai l'internet très lent moi....

Volcan

minataure

I can't download your game and I'm dying to try it!! The link doesn't work! Can you put another link for it?Is that possible?

petaglair

Quote from: Volcan on Sun 22/12/2002 22:09:02
Quote from: petaglair on Tue 10/12/2002 08:07:50mon jeu avance à  pas de fourmis mais il avance ce sera un jeu plutot long et dur à  finir....pour moi mais pour le joueur potentiel aussi

la translation selon vecteur cul:
My game advance at step of ant but he advances it go be one game rather long and hard at to finish...pro me pero pro el jogador providenciãl also


Pétaglair

To Pétaglair: j'espère que j'aurai pas à  télécharger ton jeu complet à  40 megs comme c'est le cas avec King's Quest 2 de Tierra.

C'est que j'ai l'internet très lent moi....

Volcan



aucune idée de la taille du jeu final c'est mon premier
si je le finis et qu'il fait 40 megs je pourrai l'envoyer à  personne car mon internet est pasbien rapide non plus
bon mais pour un francophone la poste est envisageable mais c'est parceque je suis gentil et puis le jeu en est à  40% de la partie artistique après ya le travail avec ags en plus puis la partie sonore bla bla bla
bref courant (fin?) 2003...

volcan=dorcan?à  qui je parle?
Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

Volcan

Quote from: petaglair on Mon 23/12/2002 00:25:27volcan=dorcan?à  qui je parle?

Tu parles à  Volcan. Pas à  Dorcan.


Volcan.



Trapezoid


Dorcan

Quote from: minataure on Sun 22/12/2002 22:12:30I can't download your game and I'm dying to try it!! The link doesn't work! Can you put another link for it?Is that possible?
Ok, maybe later. For the moment, try downloading the game from my website : http://www.dorcan.web1000.com/jeux.html

Volcan&Pétaglair :
  S'il vous plait, discutez du jeu "la porte noire" dans le topic que Pétaglaire a créé à  cet effet.
  Please talk about the game "la porte noire" in the right topic.

Volcan

Oops. Sorry Dorcan

Volcan

petaglair

hep j'ai les ciseaux trop bien je vais pouvoir tuer le père...ha non merde...et allez dans le placard encore
:)
QuoteVolcan&Pétaglair :
  S'il vous plait, discutez du jeu "la porte noire" dans le topic que Pétaglaire a créé à  cet effet

t'énerve pas... :) en plus je pensai que c'était toi volcan..cela dit go to my topic anyway


il est cool ton jeu j'ai failli eclater ma souris
i got the ciseaux and the clou and i'm stuck
do you work in smthing art related or study it?
you seem pretty skilled (i saw your web site)
i was in an art school ...
Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

Dorcan

Non je suis TRES CALME !!!

Ouais j'avais pensé faire des fin alternatives, comme tuer le père et prendre le fric...Mais il y avait la date limite du concours !!
Ah non merde faut causer english

Yeah, I tough about making alternate endings, like killing the father and taking his money...But I haden't time enough.

My website hadn't been updated since a long time, maybe I should add some stuff...

No, I don't work in something art related, because I'm a student.
I have "Art History" & "Plastical Art" courses, and we learn about colors, compositions, and some really basical things... Not really useful I would say.
Quoteyou seem pretty skilled
Thanks man ! I saw your work in your game, played it, and I can say the same thing for you

petaglair

you can use your game to enter some famous french (or other) art school it is really unusual to have a video game to enter a school that's what i will do with my game if it's playable enough
more over over your game is kinda complete it's good for you

everything is usefull son you 'll realise later as i did long after my first art school

do you draw comics or funny stuff and most important what do you want to do when you are grown up?I want to work in cinema or animated cinema and why not video games....mm well i ll continue this by mail because cj pay for the bandwidth and it's a bit out of the topic:)
Avec Nutricrotte° je voie là  differanse j'est même developper du mucsle

volmel

Wow, that was amazing.  Good job.

Ryz

Dorcan, great game. I haven't gotten out of the attic room but really it is great. I played quite a lot of the games on this site and yours looks really pretty, unique and is most interesting.

My compliments, keep it going!!!!

Pet Terry

Aww crap, I still haven't been able to play it, because I can't get to any site in web1000.com. Maybe someone could upload it some other server...?
<SSH> heavy pettering
Screen 7

Gilbert

Me neither. Seems that Web1000 sites aren't friendly to all of us.

Dorcan

Volmel & Ryz : Thanks for the comments

I have uploaded a mirror. Download it from the first topic.

Pet Terry

Now I got it and I have to say that it is awesome! Really good job.
<SSH> heavy pettering
Screen 7

Marion

Hi Dorcan, would you agree if I add your games in the french AGS website http://adventuregamestudio.fr ? :)

Dualnames

Dorcan has returned from the dead after 11 years, ROFLMAO.
Worked on Strangeland, Primordia, Hob's Barrow, The Cat Lady, Mage's Initiation, Until I Have You, Downfall, Hunie Pop, and every game in the Wadjet Eye Games catalogue (porting)

Monsieur OUXX

I've been re-reading this random conversation in French in the 2002 posts, there I some gems I can't even. So much confusion and bad grammar!
 

Myshkin

I just read a whole page of comments talking about issues with the download link before realising that they were from 13 years ago...

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