Topic: RPG character - how does she look?

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

Hello folks!

As you moght have noticed, I have started quite a few games already, but I won't bore you with a list and comments. This is the main character of an RPG I'm working on. I want some good old C&C about how I made her.

I prefer to keep the main body shape this way (or else I'll have to adapt my sprite bases, which is a nightmare to me), but I won't bite if it's no good.

Well,
here she is.

I'm awaiting your reply!

~Yurina

[DoorKnobHandle]

Your link is "broken":

DSE Server-verzoek niet toegestaan!

Dit verzoek /~yurina/walk_south-01_kairi_FORUMVERSION.PNG aan de Web-server van Digitale Stad Eindhoven is niet toegestaan!

[LimpingFish]

Unfortunately, I get an error page. 

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

Other link then...

http://www.dse.nl/~yurina/gamefiles.htm

Of course, I forgot my "no directlinking!"-server thingy...

[LimpingFish]

Very nice sprite. 

A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other?

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other?

Didn't notice that... I'll improve it right away.

EDIT: improved version is up!

[LimpingFish]

Very nice sprite indeed.

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

Very nice sprite indeed.

Thanks!

[Nacho]

I tried to link the image to help the crits, but I get a red x. Sorry. Nice sprite though.

[Reven]

Looks good!
I like it.

dont know of anything you could change....

Is there a nose there? 
maybe a bit hard to make anything look like a nose on a so small sprite..

[lo_res_man]

I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

Thanks for putting it up this way, Peder, my website server doesn't support hotlinking.

I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion

Well, I made my own base (sxplains the angle ), and I like larger sprites a bit better than small ones. I can make more details!

I'm glad you all like it (quotelist would be too long), Maybe I'll put up some other characters I'm working on (I need different bases for those...)

[Tomb Raider]

Looks pretty flawless, can't wait to see it animated.

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

I'll work on an animated version the next days, but for now I'm trying to get at least 3 backgrounds done for in the game so I can FINALLY make an in production thread.

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

I edited the hands. Take a look.

~Yurina