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I will be dead honest here, starting with the name! I would rename it "When Emos cry" instead!
(semi kidding here).
Structure of the song is very good and very competent! Your voice (it is your voice, right?) is also very good. And the doubling in the octave as well, etc.
Change is fine as well round the middle, right before the small solo.
Now for the more... accurate feedback:
* The guitar sound is rather good, but feels somewhat burried, but not because of volume only. It's the whole mixing that is slightly weird...
* Drums sound plainly bad, for the quality of the song and creation. The cymbal you keep hitting, that sounds the same and rather loud, is not really good. At least not to my taste. Same goes, unfortunately, for the piano sound. Is it midi? I don't know if you can get your hands on better samples/sounds, but it would up the song, and everything you do very very much.
* mixing. Mixing is clear for what it is actually, but feels somewhat muddy and carried away from the speakers for some reason, which doesn't seem to be reverb. It feels that the whole song is coming out of some cans or tube or something. Slightly not a lot, but it feels this way over to my monitors. Could be that it is my monitors, this is rather subjective, but still it's worth to look into it.
* bass. Where is the bass? I couldn't hear it, I couldn't notice it, was it there? :S
In all an excellent, catchy song, which needs a bit of attention in the production sector.