Topic: Little Girl Walkcycle

[joelphilippage]

Here is a walk cycle I did. It should be a 6th grade girl who is a bit proud. People say this one is a bit sleazy.

Here is a new one were she walks heel toe instead of toe heel. This works a lot better for me. It looks a lot less bouncy in ags Feel free to criticize.

[ALPHATT]

I'm not sure those clothes fit her...

[Ghost]

The second one is pretty good and indeed less "bouncy".
The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.

[joelphilippage]

The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.

There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.

[IndieBoy]

The body movement is very juddery and also her neck seems to be solid. Also her furthest away leg increases in size when it is behind her.

The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.

There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.

It is blueish violet. Maybe a cream colour might not make it contrast so much.


So a little less movement body wise, make her foot size consistent and possibly a little head movement and new top colour.
But apart from that I like it.

[Ghost]

The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.

There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.

That's what I meant, actually, sorry for being unclear. It LOOKS purple but yes, it's light blue with a tint actually. Might be with the magic pink background, that often confuses the eye (Not the best colour to chose as a background when showing a sprite, that was I was trying to say. I think. Er. Has anyone seen my hat?)

[Jakerpot]

nice animation!  But i think she bunces too much, she look like she's shacking.

[Trent R]

There's one frame that keeps bugging me, where her right arm jerks back. Or maybe that's just where the gif is looping, I can't tell.


~Trent

[Jakerpot]

yeah, trent is right, when the arm go back it`s look like its slapping a wall.