I like the expansion, but I've gotta figure out a way to preserve the alley, cause I really want that in too, but I see what you mention.
Also even though I imagined it as a small little bar, (sorta coffee shopish) the front seems empty, I think some sort of awning, or something... just needs something... maybe a poster... I'd like to paint some advertisement on the empty building wall that's like faded and cracked, like one of those old fifties ads... It's not perfect, but since it's not really for any game, I think I'm about done... It started as a doodle believe it or not.
EVERYONE has been SO helpful.
I have one final question, as long as it's done well, how do you feel about what I call 'photo-sampling' e.g. the car?
Is it cheating? Does it fit in with the rest?