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Mouth for war

I'd like some help on front view
« on: 24 Sep 2010, 20:53 »
Hi! I'm working on a new game but I always have trouble making the front view match the side view...here's what I've got so far...

PLEEEASE can someone correct this for me? I've been struggling for a while but I just suck :D
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joelphilippage

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Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #1 on: 24 Sep 2010, 21:05 »
The face matches the side view pretty well but you should finish the drawing first. We can't correct what's not there.
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Mouth for war

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #2 on: 24 Sep 2010, 21:15 »
ah yes I can do that of course It was just that the face is always hard to do...I'll post an update soon :)
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Jdinky

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #3 on: 24 Sep 2010, 22:50 »


It's a metalhead?  ;D Sorry i could not resist..
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Wonkyth

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Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #4 on: 25 Sep 2010, 09:20 »
The armbands and shoes aren't the same colour.
Not sure what else is out, though.

Perhaps that bulge down near his waist could be made a little taller, removing some of the hour-glass shape that doesn't fit the side.
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Mouth for war

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #5 on: 25 Sep 2010, 12:10 »
Ok I've updated it a little does the face match better now?


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Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #6 on: 25 Sep 2010, 12:18 »
To me, there is absolutely no problem with the face. It looks just the way I would imagine it looking from the front.  :)
Also, I liked that huge chin in the previous pictures. Why did you remove it?
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Wonkyth

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Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #7 on: 25 Sep 2010, 13:29 »
Yeah, I think the previous chin had more character.
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Jdinky

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #8 on: 25 Sep 2010, 14:08 »
Quote from: wonkyth on 25 Sep 2010, 09:20
The armbands and shoes aren't the same colour.
Not sure what else is out, though.

Perhaps that bulge down near his waist could be made a little taller, removing some of the hour-glass shape that doesn't fit the side.

It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas  :)
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Mouth for war

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #9 on: 25 Sep 2010, 14:48 »
"It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas" WORD!! :D hehe yeah i didn't spend very much time with it and i removed the chin to make the front view easier but I agree that the chin adds character. I'll see what I can do :) Thanks
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Jdinky

Re: I'd like some help on front view
« Reply #10 on: 25 Sep 2010, 15:01 »
Quote from: Mouth for war on 25 Sep 2010, 14:48
"It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas" WORD!! :D hehe yeah i didn't spend very much time with it and i removed the chin to make the front view easier but I agree that the chin adds character. I'll see what I can do :) Thanks

Let's vote: BIG CHIN  ;D
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