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TheRoger

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First sprite
« on: 20 Sep 2011, 14:16 »
So I'm trying to make  low res game and for that I need some low resolution sprites. Here's my first try:



I kinda wanted that legs would be a bit longer than usual. Can you say what this sprite lacks and what I need to edit, before I begin animating it.

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Re: First sprite
« Reply #1 on: 20 Sep 2011, 14:29 »
The contrast of the shades of similar colors is too low i.e. the two gray shades of the trousers are too similar.

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Re: First sprite
« Reply #2 on: 20 Sep 2011, 17:11 »
Something like this I suppose?


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Re: First sprite
« Reply #3 on: 20 Sep 2011, 17:26 »
Thats's better but the shading doesn't make much sense.
Where's the light coming from? Usually, the light source for a character should be above and slightly in front of them; this'll usually look the least off for all lighting conditions.

Now think of the 3D structure of a body and which parts would be hit by light and which ones won't.
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Re: First sprite
« Reply #4 on: 20 Sep 2011, 20:02 »
Something more like this?


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Re: First sprite
« Reply #5 on: 23 Sep 2011, 21:02 »
Hey, I like the character.
 So I hope you don't mind I did a small edit. My edit has 14 different colors what makes it easier to animate. Added more contrast. Made him a bit taller. The lighting comes from up left corner.
The middle one is yours. And the most right one is your pixel position with the colors from my edit.



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Re: First sprite
« Reply #6 on: 25 Sep 2011, 18:21 »
Nice work Lad, though it's a bit too late, I already started to draw sprites. Though I'll use your tips later : )