I am not impressed. Ig299, you need quite a few things here to even make this game worthwhile.
First and foremost, no matter what Darh says, you NEED an artist. I can understand that early game projects can be crude, but this is beyond crude. MS-paint stick figures with white pixels scattered around the outlines is a pretty big misstep when you are starting up the project, and this sort of visual will certainly not get you many players.
Another huge issues is the language. I take it that english is not your first language, and I understand that complicates things when writing, but please do take the time to either run everything through a spell-checker, or find someone who can read/write proper english to proof-read it for you. Just in your description of the game I can see 4 words that are not even words!
All in all, if you have a good story to tell, and can tell it so that people understand it, the piss-poor graphics can be somewhat forgiven.
If you have good gameplay and can code it well (which I doubt, based on your previous projects), this can also be used to forgive the graphics to some degree.
May the Force be with you, man, you are going to need it.
