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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #20 on: 25 Oct 2012, 01:06 »
some morbid creativity hit me muhahaharg :D 8-)
and hell yeah, I finished it!

WARNING, EXPLICIT (and still great) HORROR AHEAD!


"Is there anything to fear this time of the year?"
she asked innocently and he answered gently:
"Carolina my dear, there is one thing to fear.
Fear to be alive", said the lunatic with the knive in his hand to his wife.
"Nature is turning to grey over brown, the leaves all die and fall down.
The living are hating, the dead are celebrating.
On my mood it's restrictive, but the decay is addictive.
Although i wonder how it is to be in down under.
But nevertheless I have to confess
I feel something try to show all must to die!"

As he saw the fear in her eye glimpse like a silent cry
he knew she understood and thought to himself: "hmmm, goooood,
I will set your poor soul free" while he was rubbing his hands in glee.
So he raised his knive to threaten the life of his wife.

Knowing this is no fun or a bad pun
she turned around and started to run, looking for his gun.
Heading for the gunshelf she frightendly ask herself:
"is this all an error?" and in pure terror
her feet got stuck and she tripped over the rug.
As she violently hit the carpet she heard something crack in her head.
Feeling like wading through a cloud she noticed her world fading out,
failing reality check her thoughts turned to black.

As the black slowly started to clear she was greeted with even more fear.
She saw only white and red and she sure wasn't on her bed.
It was cold on her back and she couldn't move her leg.
And she felt lousy and a bit drousy,
not blind anymore but still out of her mind
she felt like someone tortured her legs with a prong
so she didn't wait long and looked down to check out what's wrong.
The rest of her blood turned into ice as she couldn't belive her own eyes:
he took her legs very deft and only two stumps are left
drowning in red, so that's why she's so light in the head.
A scream won't come easing her pain as she is freezing
and her throat is rough like sandpaper. And she can't move her hands either.
He tied his bride up tight and put her aside later that night
and left her there reckless as she was still away in gruesome blackness.

Then he came back to her looking even scarier,
as twisted as this is he was as naked as she is,
bringing a bigger knive and no toy shit, and you could see how much he enjoys it.
The wicked grin on his face showed no discgrace
as he used his blade cold as ice for one single but precise
cut along her cheek which painfully made her screak.
The next cut was tripple while he was making her more of a cripple by carefully removing her scared nipple.
She screamed in agony as he was cutting around on her anatomy.
Hereby he moved the knive up in front of her eye of which she only had two in supply.
She tried to move away before he could slay
her eye but despite all she tried she was tied too tight,
there was no escape, she could see the knife's shape as he spiked in her eye like in a fresh grape.
The pain made her unable to scream, it all seemed like a bad dream of which she will never redeem.

He took one deep breath which smelled to her like death
and said straight to her one eyed head that bled in deep red:
"So, Carolina, people will hear you scream in china when I now torture your Vagina!"
He bent down over the bathtub, which is easier to scrub
than his beloved bedroom carpet which he bought on a flea market.
Right when he was about to stab he could only think 'Crap!'
as he lost his ballance, regaining it was too much of a challenge,
so worst came to worst, he crashed head first
onto the bathtub and the big knive, which immediately took his wasted life
as it went in his mouth and out of his head so she could be sure he is dead.
Blood and pieces of brain spilled out insane like acid rain
all over the bathroom wall and dripping down again at a crawl
filling the air as well with a disgusting smell.
This came as a surprise, and Carolina could watch the life fade from her guy's eyes.

Night became day became night and in spite it felt quite right.
But it was not in her might with no legs and hands tied
to escape the bloodbath and unleash her wrath
on his shoddy and oddly dotty dead body
like he would have earned. Oh, how long she for this yearned.
In the end she had to concur to his dead eyes still watching her
as she died full of grief right on all hallows' eve.
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #21 on: 25 Oct 2012, 03:20 »
Awesome! I now have enough entries for the trophies I'm sure to start on at any moment. But that's no reason that the rest of you can't get your stories in and get some candy.

Two days left, AGSers. Let's have a few more entries, thank you.  :)
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #22 on: 25 Oct 2012, 04:20 »
The Wages of Pasture
   The inside of the house echoed with a dozen voices raised at once, each competing to be the loudest.  Of all the people in the house at that moment, only one was silent.  His name was Simon, and he sat at the kitchen table with his hands clasped over his ears.  He removed them for a moment to hear the garbled cascade of churning words once more, then just as quickly clasped them tightly again.  Too much!  He thought.
   Simon turned to look down the hall towards the birthday party in the living room.  A swarm of his evil little brother's friends were dancing around and screaming at the top of their lungs.  And there was his brother, the little devil, taking time out of his busy party to shake his fist at Simon.  Little shit.  He was probably the one who had smeared mud all over mom's carpet, but it was Simon who always took the flack.  His brother turned back to his chanting friends and shook his ass in Simon's direction.
   The kids were being worked into a state of tribal ferocity by a giant cow mascot.  Somewhere beneath its dopey head and black-spotted plushness lurked his Uncle Scottie, who was romping around like he had BSE in order to entertain the little brats.  At times it looked as if he were doing yoga, and at others he seemed to be wrestling some invisible demon.  Now he was doing some sort of ballet routine with a sparkly ribbon-baton spinning in his left hoof.  The kids shouted with wicked glee at his grotesque antics.  Simon shook his head.  Crazy old Uncle Scottie, he thought.  From that French end of the family....
   Simon turned back towards the kitchen.  Across from him at the table sat his step-father, leaning forward like he was trying to knock down a door with his shoulder.  His face was a contortion of frustration, bright red with two prominent veins pulsing across his forehead.  Though Simon could not hear the fury in his words, he could still feel the spray of his venom.  He was probably going on about one of the old tropes: marks, friends, chores.... it didn't matter, really.  The basic message was always the same: You're a good-for-nothing, Simon.  Try harder. 
   Simon sighed and turned further.  Beyond his step-father's shoulder his mom was frantically scraping her charred attempt at a birthday cake out of a pan, shouting at the cupboards about some emotional distress that he had caused her.  Occasionally she would fling a utensil in his direction, but otherwise ignored him.  Even the dog, a diminutive three-legged chow named Isosceles, was yipping at his ankles beneath the table.  Simon pushed his hands closer over his ears.  They all hate me, he thought.  This family is like a wolf-pack, and I'm the epsilon male that everyone vents on.  They could care less if I were dead.Whatever, man.  Whatever.  He could think just fine, if he had a little peace.  He let them all fall away from his mind: his evil little brother, his bullying step-father, his unhinged mother, even crazy old Uncle Scottie.  They didn't care about him, and he didn't care about them.  He wished he could just get away.  Far away.
   Simon opened his eyes, and was surprised to see the kitchen was empty.  He took his hands off his ears, and could hear only the muffled sounds of distant voices.  They're probably all in the backyard, he thought.  His uncle walked into the kitchen, still inside the ridiculous cow costume and tracking mud across the floor as he sauntered.  Simon shook his head, and crazy old Uncle Scottie did his emotionally distraught mime routine before going over to the sink to get a drink.  What a geekreeeeeeal smooth going down.  Well, I guess you could say it's real smooth going both ways, couldn't ya?  Anyway -say, are you writing these options down?  I used to have this room mate that swore by Pinneapple Rage, but he had this weird genetic disorder that gave him this freakishly enlarged gallbladder.  To make a long story short....."
        Simon lay in the middle of a swelling pool of blood, his outstretched hand grasping for the hangup button just out of reach.  Nooooooooooooooo!

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #23 on: 25 Oct 2012, 05:15 »
How am I supposed to go to sleep tonight after so many spooky tales?  :-D

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #24 on: 25 Oct 2012, 14:20 »
Short and sweet (like candy!). Not really on the level with other entries, but I like Halloween to much too miss out on spreading some creepiness.  :smiley:

The night has fallen.
Shadows come to play.
Some Moon will chase to nothing,
some of them will stay.

Birds stop to sing
and crickets pause in doubt.
Will they come tomorrow?
You will never find out.

In your cartoon sheets
or reading through a story,
in your lover's hug
or watching something gory

Your eyes are giving way,
struggle as you might,
something fills the air,
but there's no sense to fight.

It might be your room,
it might be your town.
You'll never know he's coming,
nightmares make no sound.
« Last Edit: 25 Oct 2012, 14:29 by Anian »
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #25 on: 25 Oct 2012, 17:46 »
MOAR!  :grin:
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #26 on: 25 Oct 2012, 18:37 »
After some bullying   encouragement  :tongue:  from Ponch, here's my entry.  My first time in the Writing Competition.    :wink:


On a dark and stormy night
I did,perchance, come across a cow.
A big white cow, with black spots.
I stared at the cow.  The cow stared back.
Then she opened her mouth.  But instead of the 'Moo' I was expecting to hear.
She spoke!

'I'm so cold', she said, 'And it's so dark.  The dark frightens me.'
'Where might I find a lamp, to light my way?'
She asked. 

A cow!  A talking cow!  Never had I seen such a creature before.
I screamed.
I ran.

The end. 
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #27 on: 25 Oct 2012, 23:20 »
Two spoons of terror

They sat at the dinner table.
They ate in silence.
Jenny started to say something about her day in school, about how the chemistry teacher fell and broke his nose.
She instantly regretted it.
"No talking while eating, it'll make you fat!", her father would say.
"Like she isn't fat already", Tommy would answer and laugh.
She put another piece of lemon bread in her mouth.
Tommy is not really there, anymore, now, is he?

Nope.
It was just her parents and her little brother, Ben.
Ben was just 4 years old, but already beginning to grow some spare tires.
Something moved across the window, Jenny ignored it.
Her father used to yell at poor Ben for his weight while his mother fed him.
It's the same story all over again, she thought.
It moved again, this time making a little shrieking noise, making her mother move uneasily on her chair.

How was it that Tommy wasn't fat at all?
He was as skinny as a skeleton, and a thin one at that.
He somehow managed to get out of this circle of terror.
She knew why.
He just took it out on her, making her take two spoons of terror.
She wouldn't do that to Ben.
No, she wouldn't lose two brothers.

"Did you hear that?", her father said.
"I think it was the doorbell", her mother replied.
"I'll go check", her father went to the door.
Jenny could have sworn she didn't hear a doorbell.
Suddenly, her mother came close to her.
She whispered to her daughter's ears:
"Jenny, take Ben and run the hell away from here. Do it now!"
She never looked so frightened.
She never looked so human.

"Mom, what are you talking about?"
"No time. Run, now!"
Jenny stood up and took Ben in her arms.
She just started running when she felt something slice through her left hand.
She fell on the floor and poor Ben fell with her, hitting his back on the legs of the table.
He started to cry.
"Nobody is going anywhere", her father said. His voice wasn't his usual voice.
Her mom started to scream.

He slapped her hard on her face.
"You're always like that. Always losing proportions!"
His eyes, there was something different in his eyes.
"No, please, no!", she begged him.
He ignored her: "Jenny, pull up a chair and sit across me."
Jenny hesitated.
"Do as I say!", he snapped.
Jenny stood up, just barely, her hand still dripping with blood from the thing that cut her.
She sat.

"Jenny, there's a time to grow up and that time is now."
He didn't seem to care at all for her hand, or for his weeping son.
"I'm offering you a choice. You have 3 minutes to decide."
"Decide what?", she muttered, barely audible.
"You know what", he said, looking at Ben.
Her mother begged again, "Please, don't!"
He slapped her again. "Ok, that's it, I'm done with her!"
He was talking to someone who wasn't there.
He took a knife that was lying down on the floor.
She saw the blood on the knife and realized it was her blood.
He jammed the knife in her mother's stomach, joining her blood with her mother's.

She looked at her mother as she took her last breaths, and shrieked.
He turned back to her.
"Ok, no more playing around, choose!"
"But why, dad, why?", she honestly wanted to understand.
He sighed.
"Frankly, Jenny, we're just too tired living this double life anymore."
She now saw him, for the first time, as who he truly was.

"Take me, dad. Take me."
He looked at her and smiled.
It wasn't a fatherly smile but it reassured her all the same.
He would keep his word.
"You're just like your brother, Tommy."
She looked at him in horror.
"Goodbye, Jenny."
Ben was still crying.


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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #28 on: 26 Oct 2012, 01:17 »
Ponch, is it possible to move the deadline by couple of days?
For the first time I started writing something for this competition, and got too busy on this week to finish it.

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #29 on: 26 Oct 2012, 02:44 »
Ponch, is it possible to move the deadline by couple of days?
For the first time I started writing something for this competition, and got too busy on this week to finish it.

Very well. Deadline (ooh! scary!) has been extended two more days. Everyone has until Sunday to get their ghost stories in. And I'm only doing this because I don't want to have any leftover candy. :cool:



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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #30 on: 26 Oct 2012, 04:37 »
Frodo: It's not bullying if I don't actually use the cattle prod.  :=

Hehe.  Was just teasing   :wink:
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #31 on: 26 Oct 2012, 08:29 »
Agent Jones walked around the garage-turned-lab, put on his nitrile gloves, and then picked up two small journals off of one of the workstations.  He shook both to remove the broken test tube glass that covered them.  His partner Agent Jeffries, a rookie, shook his head while he once again took in the torn remains that littered the floor.  Jones asked, "So you just talked to a few of the neighbors?" to which Jeffries replied, "Yes, they said our guy had a "quiet dignity" about him.  I also know that his last employer was GeneTech Industries, and as you are probably aware they eventually went out of business after the big class action lawsuit.   Jones skimmed the journal titled "PROCEDURAL LOG" and quickly realized that the technical jargon was above his head.  He was about to open the other journal titled "OBSERVATIONAL LOG" when his radio squawked to life.  Jones, knowing what was about to come next, barked orders into the handheld CB radio, "Keep the crime scene guys out for now.  Only Jeffries and I are on this until I say otherwise."  Jeffries walked over to the corner being sure to strategically place his steps to avoid the worst of the bloody carnage, pointed at the large cages, and said, "If those are any indication, his test subjects must have been some kind of large ape or...human?"  Jones replied, "Well, I don't see any apes among the bodies," as he carefully stepped around a headless corpse and looked at a high-powered microscope covered in entrails.  Jones opened the observational log to a random page near the end of the book and read while Jeffries slowly moved around the large room taking in every detail of the destruction.

September 1st, 2012
Subject continues to transform, and is doing so much more profoundly and rapidly than previous specimens.  Aggression levels are skyrocketing.  Hopefully the soundproofing will be enough to contain the roars and growling.
September 8th, 2012

October 1st, 2012October 6th, 2012October 11th, 2012

October 17th, 2012
Subject managed to kill Johnson.  I had warned my loyal assistant and business partner to exercise caution when administering gene modifications and taking samples...The test subject will not need to be fed for the next few days.  I will use this extra time to prepare the safe room in the bunker.
October 30th, 2012
  Jeffries, with a worried look on his face, replied,   Jones heard his fellow agents outside moving in and commanded into the CB radio,    The devil then threw the headless body of Jeffries at Weber, who was sent sprawling like a ragdoll from the force of the impact.  Jones tested the edge of the sword, holstered his .45, and ordered,   The devil and Agent Jones exchanged stares of hatred, and slowly walked toward each other.

The creature stood roughly eight feet tall, not counting the horns, and looked at Jones with blood red eyes that never blinked as it moved towards him.  Jones, while an imposing figure by human standards, was physically outmatched.  Regardless, he now stood nose-to-chest with the devil.  Weber watched from a crouched position transfixed by the stand-off, and advised slowly, and looked over at Jones, who appeared disoriented (but in one piece) both from the crushing bear hug and the shotgun that had roared just above his head.

As backup agents came into the room with weapons drawn at the low-ready position, Weber looked down at the remains of what he believed was some kind of evil mythological creature and muttered,   Jones grinned and replied,
« Last Edit: 26 Oct 2012, 15:52 by kconan »

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #32 on: 26 Oct 2012, 17:22 »
              :cheesy: :cheesy: :cheesy:
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #33 on: 28 Oct 2012, 21:24 »
Awwwww.
Writing is haste is not a good thing to do. I also felt like loosing inspiration a bit, so while I like some parts, others does not seem quite good. Oh, and being a non-native english speaker, etc, etc, so may contain mistakes.
Anyway, it was fun to write this :).


The Tale of Curs'd Gold

***

Those were times, that pass'd quite long ago,
This is a story quite forgotten long before.
The people's memory is twist'd by time without mercy,
Distinct the true from false they cannot anymore.

***

There was a man, who, as ones say, was brave,
Or, as the others mention, was a fool.
Named he was Marcus. Without knowing so
Condemn'd by Destiny to bear fate most grave.

He wasn't rich, yet skilled in many pursuits,
That aren't much acknowledged by the law.
Above all else a haunting dream he cherished
That made his life not worth a single straw.

One day he had been told by drunken former skipper
Of island faraway, and secret cave that holds
The treasure of the greatest king, dead long ago.
He sworn he had been passing by on his trustworthy clipper.

And so much was Marcus's lust for treasure,
He did not want to live, each day became travail.
So once he sold right all of his possessions,
Did buy a ship, hir'd crew and hastly set the sail.

Three times they crossed the sea and sought
For isle of wonder; and lastly saw the shore;
There gray-beard'd hermit stood on guard,
Who, as a warning, raised his sword.

Two blades did clash, two men did bravely fight,
Yet soon did Marcus put the oldman to his death.
And just before he shuffled off this mortal coil
The hermit croaked with his remaining breath:

"The gold is curs'd! Beware, fool, beware!"
But Marcus laughed at him and walked
Into the luring op'ness of the cave,
Of horror he awakens unaware.

Descended he, and with his every step
His heart beat stronger. Then - he gasp'd and reel'd:
Beyond the final turn the flickering torchlight
The treasure of his cherish'd dreams revealed.

It took a week to board everything, at best,
But when they set the sails again they had
The bags of gold that number'd fourty four,
And large precious-gems-full chest.

To home town Marcus did return as hero.
He built himself a mansion at the river's brim,
Surrounded himself by flattering admirers,
Who promptly satisfied his each and every whim.

Yet, although Marcus reached his paramount goal,
Fullfilled his boldest dreams, victorious and happy,
He still could not forget the dying hermit's words.
They'd left a nagging scar somewhere in his soul.

One year had passed. That was a windy night,
And Marcus couldn't sleep, his thoughts did halt.
He heard a distant noise. Inquietude did make him
To rise from bed and walk to mansion's vault.

He open'd heavy door, - it moved with low rasp,
And peer'd inside. His hair stood on end.
The treasury was swarmed by morbid shadows.
They quickly turned, alarmed by Marcus's gasp.

The man could not believe in what he sees.
The bags of gold were moving like the living creatures.
Four ugly arms were scaled by yellow met'l
And did protrude from linen tissue breaches.

They lacked the eyes, yet their senses would
Detect the man, so they did slowly move,
Displaying sharpest teeth in their mouths,
To where in confusion Marcus stood.

In horror, Marcus ran. And, following his steps,
The living bags of gold rushed forward, their claws
Were leaving scratches deep all over the place,
And air trembled with their loud roars.

Few times he was too close to the certain death,
The monsters split, him trying to surround.
They howled, and barked, and scraped the floor,
And Marcus almost faint'd from their putrid breath.

He left the house and almost made escape,
When from the upper balcony, with utmost zest
Like hunting tiger on its prey did leap
The large precious-gems-full chest.

The pile of bags had fastly hid beneath
The writhing body of the man, and gnaw'd
On flesh, and Marcus cried in pain,
Tormented by the golden claws and teeth.

***

Those were times, that pass'd quite long ago,
Yet people say, and that is rightly so:
The townsfolk had never heard a yell such grim
Like poor dying Marcus's horrid dying scream.

***

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #34 on: 28 Oct 2012, 23:38 »
CW, you made it!  :cheesy:

Okay, I'm going to bed in six hours, and I'm tucking the deadline in with me. If anyone else wants some candy, get your story in quickly.
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky!
« Reply #35 on: 29 Oct 2012, 05:13 »
Okay, the deadline has arrived (again) and this time I mean it. The 2012 Spooktacular Writing Contest is over and it's time to vote.

Our contestants are:

Onker
Senitrena
Selmiak
Baron
Anian
Frodo
Tzachs
Kconan
Crimson Wizard

So cast your votes, AGS Community, and determine who gets chocolate candy and who gets pennies.  :-*
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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky! ***VOTE***
« Reply #36 on: 29 Oct 2012, 06:24 »
Selmiak

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky! ***VOTE***
« Reply #37 on: 29 Oct 2012, 07:12 »
I'd go with kconan.
All stories were fun to read. Frodo cracked me up and selmiak made my insides turn in disgust, but kconan's story had a very good vibe to it, and got me hooked till the very end.

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky! ***VOTE***
« Reply #38 on: 29 Oct 2012, 11:32 »
Baron - The Wages of Pasture

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Re: Fortnightly Writing Competition - Spooky! ***VOTE***
« Reply #39 on: 29 Oct 2012, 14:51 »
Tzachs - two spoons of terror.

There was some really good writing, and some excellent story craft, but my vote goes for the one that struck me as the spookiest.