Feedback on a short cut scene!

[Martyn]

It's the approach of the airplane working, the turn?

I want it simple and less grafik. now it's the airplane five gif images.

https://vimeo.com/142434855

Code: ags

Sorry, its little cranky in the beginnings, it makes a smooth approach but my computer is thinking too much.

[Blondbraid]

Looks pretty neat and lovely graphics, though I'm no aviation expert and cannot tell whether the plane moves correctly. I see nothing wrong with it though.

[selmiak]

looks good and the path is okay, the animation could need 2-3 frames inbetween if you want to go the extramile, otherwise it is okay already.

[Martyn]

Thanks!

It may be as it is now, has just made a few small changes in time.

[Kumpel]

All in all I like it. It looks nicely designed and the turn frames are fitting.

Here are some ideas:

Maybe you could animate the propeller too. Would help me "believe" that it's actually flying.
Also the drop in second 7 to 8 is a bit rough. a plane like that doesn't do these kinda drops imo.
The speed away from the camera seems a bit low. I think a plane would get smaller much faster on a "steady cam shot".
Maybe a streamline would make it more "graphic" too.

Cheers
Kumpel

[Martyn]

Thanks, yeah that's a good idea! maybe i going to change that later.

I was also thinking of have the island as a separate piece, an make a parallax view of i
So it locks like the camera following the plane, In few seconds!

... but now i wanna make the demo playable!So  that you guys can see the game!

[selmiak]

... but now i wanna make the demo playable!So  that you guys can see the game!

That's what I think is a good idea