Indy sprite

[Monsieur OUXX]

Any paintover of this is welcome, provided it doesn't change the character's height (the eyes must not be moved up or down) or style (don't turn it into cartoony style).
I think it has reached the stage where written critics can only lead to misunderstandings. I strongly suggest you paint over the bits that you consider faulty.


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VERSION 2
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Credits go to Amelie & ProgZmax for the original work base.

[nads]

I love the sprite. The only thing I can notice that looks off in my eyes is that Indy's right hand looks too small. But other than that, looks pretty kick arse to me

[Avirosb]

I'm probably not the right person to be doing this because that sprite is more than I could ever do but regardless...
I thought the hat in the original might have looked a bit big, so what I did was darken the squares were the eyes normally would be,
attempting a kind of "blending effect" with the brim and the shade.



To me it looks like he looks more straight-forward now, though it might not look as good if you zoom in on it.
Oh well, that's spriting for ya.

[Monsieur OUXX]

To me it looks like he looks more straight-forward now, though it might not look as good if you zoom in on it.

Not at all, it's actually a good enhancement. I'm not very good at those "indirect enhancements" where changing pixels somewhere makes it look better somewhere else. To me, that's black magic.

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[Monsieur OUXX]

Please vote (on each point separately)


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PS: Amelie you didn't respect the one requirement I expressed (don't move the eyes up or down) so I had to move the head one pixel down on your sprite.

[Twesty]

I like hat 2 but body 1

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[Danvzare]

Definitely body 1.
But neither hat is perfect. You need some sort of cross between hat 1 and hat 2.

[Monsieur OUXX]

I can't decide  Both have no neck...

They have no neck because there's the jacket's collar. I welcome criticism but your sprite's shoulders are too pushed backwards and narrow. There's got to be a proper solution.

[Fred Five]

Did a quick paint-over of the hat. Do not like either hat 1 nor 2.

/Fred

[Monsieur OUXX]

Did a quick paint-over of the hat. Do not like either hat 1 nor 2.

Every time someone saves pixel art as JPG instead of PNG, a kitten dies!

[Hobo]

Pushed a few pixels around, maybe some parts or details will prove useful. The shading and colors of my edits are quite random and I wouldn't really know how to fix them without seeing some of the game backgrounds first.

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The main issues for me were that baggy right arm and those tiny hands, both of which have already been addressed by others.
The original spirte also had a surprisingly high color count (I personally wouldn't enjoy animating a pixel art sprite with 71 colors), I pulled it down to 30, but with better color choices that number could probably be much lower.

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[Monsieur OUXX]

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Once again, please tell which is your favorite
1) body
2) hat.

[Mouth for war]

Body 4, Hat 2 looks best for me

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[Danvzare]

Hat 3 and Body 3, but with the colour scheme of Body 5.

[Tremulas]

Body 3
Hat 4

[Monsieur OUXX]

Body 3
Hat 4

OK I must say this hread confuses me a lot. Am I the only one to see hats 4 and 5 only like a bowl hat ? How could it be Indiana Jones' brim/fedora ?