Naomi picture

n3tgraph · Wed 16/04/2003 17:02:33

hey no offence jimi, it doesn't matter

as for the picture, I don't know he was pretty offended when dragon rose made it quite better too

* N3TGraph puts a helm on Rince

But the arms and legs sure improved

Rincewind · Wed 16/04/2003 19:12:27

N3TGraph:
Yeah, I know... That's why I'm being a bit careful... Thanks for the helm, I always wanted one...

Just a touch up this, with thinner shoulders and other things...

n3tgraph · Thu 17/04/2003 07:48:48

looks better everytime

I start wondering what mats will think of it

But now she looks a bit too young, maybe the hips should be a bit wider - she shouldn't look down and she should smile a bit more

remixor · Thu 17/04/2003 08:05:06

Wow, good job Mats and assorted helpers :o
I hope I get this much feedback when I start submitting concepts of the game I'm working on

Rincewind · Thu 17/04/2003 09:44:05

Ok, this is where I stop... Hehe... I was just toying around a bit for my own sake, and I'll wait for Mats comments before I start changing her face or hips...

Thanks anyway!

Remixor:
I'm sure you will, man!

n3tgraph · Thu 17/04/2003 12:04:45

Hey, I'll help anyone (if I can)

And if your name isn't remixor

just kidding

remixor · Fri 18/04/2003 06:05:21

N3TGraph:

BTW, I now DO have something posted in the Critics Lounge; I'd really appreciate you guys checking it out!

Mats Berglinn · Wed 23/04/2003 08:09:02

Rincewind, thanks for updating the front for Naomi, she looks more better this way, and thanks for drawing the shoes foward. It's quite hard for me to draw shoes or feet in front like that on both male and female characters.

I have come back from Spain and I'll try to fix the Naomi side veiw and also make her from behind.

QuoteBut now she looks a bit too young, maybe the hips should be a bit wider - she shouldn't look down and she should smile a bit more

Is she really too young? I didn't noticed. Naomi is suppoused to be almost as old as I am (I have become 20 about yesterday). But wider hips? To be logical (I think) you really can't she those because she wears a shirt but maybe you're right. I don't really know if she should smile. In the game she is keeps getting tracked down two men who want her because she have a secret about a treasure which she needs to find and in which I (yes, I'm the main-character in the game Hawaiian Treasure) have to find. If you compair with early adventure games like Monkey Island and Day of the Tentacle, most characters dont have smiles on their faces so I didn't mind about that Naomi doesn't smile but if you guys thinks it's necessary then I'll fix it.

n3tgraph · Wed 23/04/2003 08:23:08

ummm well

Lemme say this, if it weren't for the tits and long hair I'd say she's 12
and I think she shouldn't look down

but maybe that's just me

AlphaMole · Wed 23/04/2003 12:10:16

*edit; erm.. nevermind*

Rincewind · Wed 23/04/2003 18:31:35

You're welcome, Mats!

I usually have problems drawing shoes from the front too, but this time it went really good.
And as for her age, I had no idea she was supposed to be in her 20's, so I sort of though of her as an teenager... Oops. :

Mats Berglinn · Wed 23/04/2003 19:59:24

That's okay. I'm very satisfied with the final version. I don't really think she looks like teen. Maybe I could widen her skirt a bit. But I wait with that until I have done her other veiws and the other things for the game, Hawaiian Treasure.

Rincewind · Wed 23/04/2003 21:19:06

Okely-dokely-doo. I'll be waiting patiently for the release!