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KyriakosCH

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3 rooms and a character
« on: 12 Oct 2017, 15:41 »
Or something aspiring to be that :=

Is the style decent enough? (it is a horror game, should go without saying :) )






Cassiebsg

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Re: 3 rooms and a character
« Reply #1 on: 12 Oct 2017, 16:40 »
I think they need contrast, the darks should be dark and the lit areas bright.
Right now it's kind of a washed out watercolor, which to me doesn't inflict fear or apprehension, just a "what's up with the colours?!" kind of feeling.

But I'm not much into horror, so don't mind me.
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KyriakosCH

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Re: 3 rooms and a character
« Reply #2 on: 12 Oct 2017, 17:23 »
I think they need contrast, the darks should be dark and the lit areas bright.
Right now it's kind of a washed out watercolor, which to me doesn't inflict fear or apprehension, just a "what's up with the colours?!" kind of feeling.

But I'm not much into horror, so don't mind me.

I am not trying to make it realistic/perfect; my skills in colour tone/image setting are those of an amateur ;) (my modelling is a better, but that alone will go only that far). But i think it may be enough for a free horror game, and not ruin any sense of dread.