Criticism on first screen of a game

[Fedx]

Hi! I'm trying to convey a sense of a desolate place, like it was done with a mix of pixel art and low poly images.



What could be improved? I don't know how to feel about that bit of green in the grass below the pillar.

[selmiak]

a quick overpaint



The rock itself casts a shadow on the ground when there is glow from itself. also it's glow shines on that tree. Also I added some very bright light from the moon to the tree and rock and the mountains. and I forgot to add the shadow of the rock onto the ground, just like the shadow from the tree...

[Fedx]

Wow thanks a ton! Those little details really lift up the image, thanks!