Author Topic: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?  (Read 404 times)

Not sure how to remove this post, I'm going to redo the entire thing.

Thanks for replies.
« Last Edit: 05 Jun 2018, 13:03 by CherishKuddleMonster »

Too much clicking

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Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #1 on: 04 Jun 2018, 23:38 »
To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

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Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #2 on: 05 Jun 2018, 00:12 »
The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #3 on: 05 Jun 2018, 13:04 »
To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

Thanks for suggestion I'm going to start over from scratch.

Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #4 on: 05 Jun 2018, 13:04 »
The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

Too much clicking

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Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #5 on: 05 Jun 2018, 14:00 »
Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

B/w is totally fine. I could see all of it.

Re: Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?
« Reply #6 on: 05 Jun 2018, 14:24 »
I struggled to make it out on my laptop, so Stupot wasn't the only one.