Little Sally

Started by danman23, Sun 23/09/2018 18:37:34

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danman23

Hi! Just wanted to get some criticism for this character I created.


[imgzoom]https://thumb.ibb.co/iAJaCU/Little_Sally0.png[/imgzoom]

Edited: thanks khris should of done that

Monsieur OUXX

Good sprite. Maybe boost the contrast and saturation a tiny bit? And try to make the hair's shading more interesting? (I wouldn't know how, though)
 

Khris

If you use IMGZOOM instead of IMG we can take a closer look.

dactylopus

For assistance:

[IMGZOOM]https://thumb.ibb.co/iAJaCU/Little_Sally0.png[/IMGZOOM]

I quite like the sprite.  The hair could use a bit more work though, as much is lost when scaled down.

cat

I agree that the hair needs more contrast. I think you should also remove the double-pixel from the skirt outline or replace them by proper shading.

danman23

#5
How about this?


danman23


Khris

(not a paintover, just imgzoom...)

[imgzoom]https://thumb.ibb.co/ijGcE9/Little_Sally0.png[/imgzoom]

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