Ice Maiden

[Neole]

Not too pleased with it, the composition is messy..

[Flippy_D]

Sharp.

[AndersM]

Nince work Neole, but since this is the critics lounge: Ice is not the first thing i think of when i see this picture, I dunno why, but maybee she doesn't look 'cold' enough...

[Xadhoom]

Agree with MrMasse, but very nice nonetheless. What are all these layouts for? Are they concept art for a game you're making or what?

[Evil]

Looking great! I really look up to you. I agree with them also. Maybe put some wind swirls or something?

[Zmir]

Looking realy good Neole.
i personaly dont like her icey head thingy.
but that could be just me and my tatse.
but its looking realy nice either way.

[Neole]

Thanks guys! I dont think I have done an ice thing before so it was difficult to get the icey feel. Maybe I should have added crystalline facets to her bodies. Swirls would have been a good idea, though this was supposed to be an indoor ice castle sorta scene. The icicle head got too big I guess!

Xadhoom, these are just practise sketches I try and do daily. Not for any game.