3Thousand-Shooting/Action game

Started by MAZAA, Fri 10/10/2008 16:35:44

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MAZAA

About the game

In the game player are pilot of the spaceship and make some missions.Like searches for something or hunt aliens.Story is simply Aliens are attacked to Earth and they are everywhere.

Now

4/5 levels are ready and I think game is ready after February or after march I am not sure
because last level will be awesome battle on the planet mars

41% Ready

Characters 50%
Graphics 69%
Story 60%
Scripting 35%
Sound/Music 30%

Screenshots







Akatosh

Hi Mazaa, and welcome to the forums. First of all, congratulations on getting this far! If you can finish this game, I'll be sure to play it.

About the graphics: You may want to reconsider the"stone" texture. Seriously, it reminds me of one of these "magic vision" books (or whatever they're called), in that you can see a structure only if you concentrate really hard, and that they fuck up your eyes. I'd advise you to try and whip up some basic pixel art, then head over to the Critics Lounge and get suggestions for further improvement.

Regarding your scripting problems, the manual knows a lot of stuff, but if you really run into a dead end, there's always Beginner's Tech. (For the correct "procedure", check here), and never mind the hostility.

Oh, and you may want to post a second screenshot - you know- forum rules and stuff.

That said, best of luck with your game!  :)

Darth Mandarb

#2
First, please include a second (different) in-game screenshot.

Also ... make sure the images appear in this thread so people don't have to click on them to view.

Lastly, you cannot post BMPs on these forums so see about converting them to PNG or some other small-ish filesize.

Please update soon so I need not lock this thread...


Thanks ... good luck with your game.

MAZAA

#3
Maybe I fix stone textures but in full screen mode It didn`t disturb me




TwinMoon

I can honestly say looking at that first screenshot hurts my eyes.

It would probably already be a lot better if you make the stone texture with the smaller stones (where you can fly over presumably) a lot darker, so there's more colour difference between them.

But anyways, congratulations on getting this far! It seems like an interesting game. Will it be a pure adventure game or will we also be able to shoot stuff?

MAZAA

I fixed mountain level(first screenshot) and could you say wich one is better



Akatosh

This one is better for sure, but still... no. It looks like you grabbed two random stone images from somewhere and copy-pasted them in MSPaint until they started to resemble a mountainscape. If you're going to travel down Easy Street in terms of backgrounds (just as I do  :=), I'd recommend you grab The Gimp and toy around with that "image floodfill" funcitons. It's what I did with the wall here - it's not too much work, but the results are decent.

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