Lucky Mellody Tomorrow. (Now with alpha demo)

Started by ginanubismon, Thu 12/01/2006 05:06:02

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ginanubismon


The opening scenes.


A disguesting room.


Spot the refernce and get a cookie!

DETAILS:

Genre: Cliche-Horror.

View Prespective: First person W/ character frames.

Story:

Robin Platter had just escaped being a forced bride to her demented neighbor and witness the death of her father in a feiry blaze. For monthes she is pleaged with questions before this had happened and now, just after escaping death, she wants answers for the unusual events that surround her and she wants them now.

Heading for the hospital where she was born at she hopes to learn the truth there but is unspecting of the nightmare that will unfold before her.

The Main Characters.

Robin Platter.

Born a boy and lived a normal life until an very horrific explosion had mysteriously changed the boy into a girl. Ever since she has been pleaged by various problems from perverted neighbors and isolation from her friends to a troubled mother and an angry father. She is here at the hospital for answers.

Clive Midwich.

A ghost hunter out to learn more about the world around him he comes to this hospital to study spirital activities.

Dean Jones.

A young "lEEt" member of the internet board "Hell hunters" he came to the hospital in hopes to catch the rising fad of haunted hospitals and take photographes of the place to keep his "elite-ness".

Completed.

STORY: 20%
BACKGROUND: 30%
CHARACTERS: 60%
SCRIPTING: 32%
OVERALL: 28%
TARGET RELEASE DATE(TRD): By the end of the year.

Future plans:

- Clean up (or change) main title.

- Re-draw orginal art work.

- Re-write dialog after grammar and spell check.

Comments:

I have been working and re-working on this game for some time now as I was not happy with the animation effects and how the main characters looked so I just grabbed some anime pictures I have on my hard drive and edited them to fit the game a bit (gotta add a disclaimer at the end like the fanfiction pros doÃ,  ;D) and here I am today.

And yes, I realize that the title is mispelled. I will fix it when I get a chance (or leave it, like ratphink a booboo).

New comments:

After taking a break I went through the first half of the game finding as many of glitches I can find then decide that I should add onto the game as it fells short and unfufilling, I might add on a second floor and two new wings as well as an actual showdown with the "good doctor".

Official Alpha Demo.

http://www.geocities.com/hellruinkaimaramon/Luck.zip
"I shall call thee, Roger Ellison David Nicouli Etcher Calvin Kevin Sue in honor of what kind of a big jack@$$ you had been to guys like me." ADR -01 Jabberwock Type on fanfiction writers.

The Book

Hmmm...

Locations appear tad desolate because of the lack of sprites - the game is played from first person perspective, I gather?

As to the story, it's nothing short of bizzare, but then, adventure games had witnessed too many rewrites of well-known themes to be able to take them anymore, so extraordinarity of your plot might turn out to be a positive quality in the long run.

Mordalles

looks really interesing!

the one character who changed from a boy to girl reminds me of ranma 1/2.  ;D

good luck with the game.

"It's a fairy! She's naked! Curse these low-res graphics!" - Duty and Beyond

ginanubismon

#3


The Medical exam room.



The new title screen and name.



The dialog Screen, and Dean Jones.

NEWS.

- Will include a back story to the hospital that will be told through various spirits instead of books (with exceptions).

- Over there, the alternate hospital.

EDIT: Fix a small mistake.
"I shall call thee, Roger Ellison David Nicouli Etcher Calvin Kevin Sue in honor of what kind of a big jack@$$ you had been to guys like me." ADR -01 Jabberwock Type on fanfiction writers.

ManicMatt

Sorry, is that a digesting room or a disgusting room? What is it exactly?

Don't be discouraged by the lack of comments, if your gameplay is up to scratch when people play it, word will get round of what it's like to play!

ginanubismon

Quote from: ManicMatt on Sat 14/01/2006 09:53:36
Sorry, is that a digesting room or a disgusting room? What is it exactly?

Don't be discouraged by the lack of comments, if your gameplay is up to scratch when people play it, word will get round of what it's like to play!

It is disgusting room, sorry for the screw up but I am usually tired after working hard on the game and miss things like that.

I am surprise by the responce I have gotten so far as usual ideas goes ether unheard or looked down upon in fanfiction and I am very happy and just fuels my ego then in turns fuels my urge to make it somewhat better.
"I shall call thee, Roger Ellison David Nicouli Etcher Calvin Kevin Sue in honor of what kind of a big jack@$$ you had been to guys like me." ADR -01 Jabberwock Type on fanfiction writers.

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