Donut bar mafia

[Clip]

It's my first game whit AGS and story isn't very brilliant.

Story:
Clip has to buy a bottle of car wax to wash hes father's car. When he goes to shop the adventure starts.

Screenshots:

I'll hope you like that humwee


I'll make English version too.("Ilus vaade Türile" means "Nice view to Türi")

Story: 90%
Graphics: 90%
Scripting: 70%
Music & sounds: 100%

I've made this game about three days. I'm not sure about realease date.

[Uku]

Weeha!!

My first tough(looked picture "ilus vaade türile")Estonial(as me).Then "türile" i tourg from my town?! and after little brain twisting i figured out who you are.
first(when i eaven didnt knew who you are)i looked theese 2 pictures and looked:"this graphic is so into my taste!"

I hope it comes good game, as said before, graphic rules(in my opinion)!
and ialso hope game comes out soon  too and it is interesting.

PS!:order your little brother that he wont tell me to much  about puzzles of this game!(he havent still ).

Keep up good work! I am waiting forvard to it!

[ManicMatt]

Looks quaint!

"Nice view to turi"? Oh, do you mean "A nice view of Turi"? Yeah, after you've done your translation to english getting someone who's native tongue is english to mend the lines might be a good idea.

[Uku]

spellIng not spellUng!

Anyway clip what font do you use ? word one?
what do you mean, that story isnt brilliant? may i help you out with that?

[Clip]

Yes it think that is a good idea. If I let somebody to correct my translation (gotta mention that my english isn't very good).

This font is Arial.ttf

[DonB]

It looks really good.. curious how it will be..