the Adventures of Hank and Badger (WARNING: POSSIBLY OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE)

Started by Badger, Fri 19/02/2010 13:07:36

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Badger

Hank, a shopping centre security guard, and his immoral sidekick Badger, take part in solving viscious murders, with dire and comedic consequences...

a wryly adult humour game.




Script/Story - 90%
Music/Sound - 0%
Content/Backgrounds - 80%
Animation - 20%
Scripting - 5% (First room scripted)

soft deadline is September 2010. Quite a nice long time to get everything just right..as things always evolve and change the longer you spend with them :)

If I've missed any info, gimme a shout


poc301

I like the art style, and REALLY like the interface for some reason.  Very cool.

-Bill

Badger

Ok, it's had a slight revamp, and I've linked a demo.

It's a little large, but should take a good few minutes to get through.

Unfortunately there's still no sound, and the movie intro is quite rubbish (unreadable)..but it's a work in progress.

Please comment, I'm more than happy to recieve some decent criticism.


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Chicky

Hey buddy, figured you deserved a reply!

Take this how you want (you wanted criticism!) but it seems to me like you have a very established and stylised technique about your artwork that is both unique and functional. I really like the loose vector style of your backgrounds but the vulgar humour really doesn't sit well with me. I find it it almost offensive, a line like 'I'm not wanking while YOU'RE watching!' screams immature and inappropriate.  You don't have to listen to me but i get the impression that this is the reason for your lack of replies, i think a more established and less blatantly offensive style of humour would be appropriate. I haven't played the demo but why not elaborate on the story a little more, write something that will make me want play until the end, write characters that are both vulgar and likeable (think Peter Griffin, Quagmire etc).

I may be wrong and you might have the humour spot on in the demo, but this is just the impression i got from your thread.

Best of luck finishing, i'm enthralled with those backgrounds so i will sure be playing the finished product!

Badger

Thanks Chicky, appreciate the honesty,

There's quite a bit of gratuitous vulgarity in the game, and my beta testers found the game quite fun.
Though i can imagine it's not everyone's cuppa :)

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