Comic Contest (13/2 - 27/2) Winner: MrBen

Started by Revan, Mon 13/02/2006 14:10:16

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Revan

OK people are you ready?

When Golf (Mini or Normal) Goes BAD!

Think US open mixed with the Terminator, Think Jim's Crazy Golf mixed with Sword Fights, Think Tiger Woods mixed with a Blender....

You get the idea... now go make...Ã,  ;D

Tuomas

Though I'd post the winning entry right away

Revan


Saberteeth

looolÃ,  ;D. But how'd he get that giant gun to fit in his pocket(seat).;)

Tuomas

Well the minigun was obviously from the hole the ball never reached!

MrBen


Corey

ohh all this anger and violence  :o
Greatest thrill
Not to kill
But to have the prize of the night
Hypocrite
Wannabe friend
13th disciple who betrayed me for nothing!

MrBen


Revan


Ashen

I know what you're thinking ... Don't think that.

vict0r

Just whipped up this quick entry


Corey

Here's mine, hope you like it  ;) :


Greatest thrill
Not to kill
But to have the prize of the night
Hypocrite
Wannabe friend
13th disciple who betrayed me for nothing!

Revan

lol likin all the entrys..... keep em comin... (aw wish i could enter lol)

SpacePirateCaine

It's been a long time since I entered one of these.

Hope y'all liked that.
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vict0r


Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens



Tom S. Fox

I don't quite get it.Ã,  ???

EDIT: Oh, I get it now! Kind of tricky!

Revan

Original Idea would have to go to Neil Dunmah
Best drawing has to go to SpacePirarteCain
But Overall winner with the;
Best Story has to be MrBen!!!!, I'm liking your Bob Comics (pitty you wont be entering the next one as it will be your comp..)

SpacePirateCaine

Awesome. Congratulations, Mr. Ben! It was a fun contest - not a whole lot of new entries after the initial spurt, but there were definitely a reasonable number, and they were all pretty groovy. I was particularly fond of Vict0r's, personally - says a lot in very few words, so to speak.

Looking forward to the next competiton!
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Kinoko

SPC: Awesome comic! One thing bugged me though... "You took way too fucking long to set up that shot" seems like it would sound better as "You took way too fucking long setting that shot up". Or something. But anyway, the art is -great-! Always love your drawings.

Neil: GREAT! I love it :D

Afflict

Great work, SPC! I thought yours was funnier too... mmmph

SpacePirateCaine

Funny, that - I was actually having trouble coming up with an appropriately good line in that frame. Being the only real speech in the comic, it's really important, too.

I was originally going to have a few more frames, where the caddie said, essentially, "It's three in the afternoon, we're on the sixth hole of eighteen and we've been here since dawn. I'm tired, hungry and you make me wear these stupid damned caddie pants every time we come here. I'm going home" Or something along those lines, but I thought that was just a little too agro for the comic, and would've dragged it on longer than it needed to. I like your rewrite of the line.

Not even sure if that's a shot, a drive, a putt or what. I don't know the first thing about golf. Oh well, it was fun to draw, and I loved the other entries in the contest as well. Took me a moment to figure out Neil's as well, but it was definitely well executed.
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Kinoko

I don't know crap about golf either so it sounds fine to me. I thought it was a great line though, really made me laugh ^_^ Actually, I'm not sure if my rewrite does sound better anymore. I'm an English teacher in a foreign country, I'm losing touch with the English through analysing it too much.

Corey

Hurry MrBen start a new one!! I cant wait  :D ;D :)
Greatest thrill
Not to kill
But to have the prize of the night
Hypocrite
Wannabe friend
13th disciple who betrayed me for nothing!

Squinky

He hasn't been logged on since the 18th, you might need to go to a second place winner if this takes too long.

Corey

shall I PM him?? you get an email to confirm a PM message right??
Greatest thrill
Not to kill
But to have the prize of the night
Hypocrite
Wannabe friend
13th disciple who betrayed me for nothing!

Gilbert


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