Voice competition (16th-22th)

Started by Tom S. Fox, Fri 16/06/2006 15:39:17

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Tom S. Fox

Okay, my first time I provide a script for the voice competition!
Since I am so uninspired, I decided to use a situation from a webcomic I'm planning.
Sound effects are appreciated but not neccesary!

List of characters and some of their mannerisms, so you can understand them better:Ã,  ;)
Tim
Donnie (Ubergeek)
Sabrina (Hobby-slut)
Vicky (Sabrina's bestest girlfriend on the world)

Okay, here goes:

(Tim, Donnie, Sabrina and Vicky are standing at the bus stop, waiting for the school bus.)
Vicky: I'll smoke one, before the bus arrives...
Sabrina: Good idea! I'll too!
(Vicky lights a cigarette and looks over to Sabrina.)
Vicky: Err... Sabrina? You have a tampon in your mouth!
Sabrina: Oh... And I thought, I'm having the clap, again!
Vicky: Oh, the bus is coming!
(Vicky throws away her cigarette and enters the bus, Donnie picks it up and licks it with pleasure)
Donnie: *Sigh!*
Tim: Hey!
Donnie: Yikes!
Tim: What are you doing?
Donnie: I, er, was just assuring, that this cigarette wasn't burning anymore!
Tim: Say, are you in love with Vicky?
Donnie: *Sigh* Yes, it's true! I love her since I accidentally stepped into the girl's room in school and caught her with no pants on!
Tim: I heard more than I wanted to know...
(Later, in school, the bell rings to announce the break. Tim and Donnie leave their class room)
Tim: Hey, look, Vicky is standing over there! Ask her out!
(Tim pushes Donnie in Vickys direction)
Donnie: Oof! Er, hey, Vicky!
Vicky: Yeah?
Donnie: I was wondering, whether you'd like to...
Vicky: Yeah?
Donnie: ...err, club some baby seals?
(Awkward silence)
Vicky: Err... Sorry, but I have to go somewhere, er, where you aren't!
(Vicky walks away, Tim walks over to Donnie and stares at him reproachful.
Donnie: I WAS NERVOUS!!!

The script might contains grammar mistakes. Just correct them.
@ManicMatt: Sorry, that the script contains four characters, but one of them barely has something to say.
I hope, you'll join anyway!Ã,  :D

ManicMatt

Yeah maybe I'll push myself to do this (sick) script, but what's a hobby-slut?

Tom S. Fox

#2
Aw, c'mon! Is it really that sick?
I mean, who's the one, who wrote a script about a clown, who turns little children into hamburgers? Huh? HUH?!?!
To answer you question: I could have written nymphomaniac, but I didn't come up with the word and I like my term better!


Tom S. Fox

LOL, that was hilarious!
I'm glad you really got into it, even though, you thought this is sick!Ã,  :D
Your interpretation of Donnie was much more perverted and less pathetic than I imagined him, (no wonder, you thought the script was sick) but it's hilarious nonetheless!Ã,  ;D
I was laughing my ass off!
And when you said "...club some baby seals?" you sounded just like Neil Goldman, so it was just fitting!

Anybody else out there who wants to try and top this?

Tom S. Fox

Okay, and this would make ManicMatt the winner by default (once again)!!!
However, you deserved it nevertheless!
I hope you had fun. I did!
Well, it's your turn.
Hit it!

ManicMatt

Maybe I'll celebrate later.

Yeah it was fun doing the pervert/geek guy's voice, and I think my voice work was better than previous entries. However I have to say, unless someone else wants to write up the next competition, I think this compo is dead, and there's little point in me writing up an entry for one or two (If we're lucky) people to enter.

Shame more people didn't enter, it's the only compo I enter.

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