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We want him to be simple.But not too simple we need a few details?
And his arms are not quit right but how to improove them?
Every advice is helpfull :D
THANKS[/color]
Maybe if you move his shoulders up a little bit, his arms out a little, and make his head slightly less sharp.
I'll try to do a quick paint-over to show.
EDIT:
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Yeah, you've probably got it better than I do. :P
Try moving his arms away from his body like I did.
Thanks Mozza.
Is this better, what else we could make better?
The colour is really really dark, at least when viewed with this monitor here it looks like it's a just a shape filled with black, I can't make out detail until I stick closely to the screen.
Unless it's intended to be filled like that (to make it look more mystery or something like that), I'll recommend:
1. lighten the colours, or
2. change the colour of the outlines to bright colours (even white)
I agree with gilbot, you should consider change his colours, because he looks like the shadow of an alien..
Well on our monitor it looks bright enough.But if you say so we will change his color.
Can anyboy tell us how to do a propper shading on him.
i k a r and Gilbot thanks :).
And Mozza we will move his arms thanks for advice :).
Edited see first post.
Do we have to make it brighter is it better what can we improove?
THANKS[/b]
I think it is great as it is. You could make the colours a bit brighter unless it effects the gameplay. For detail or something you could give him a flesh-wound or scars or something according to his personality.
I can't help but feel that maybe your monitor's brightness is turned up higher than average? It's a tad too dark for me too, even in the new edit.
An alien sure has got me intrigued about the story.. :)