An intro, BG for my new game... needs C&C

[bytestud10]

Ok all,

Well I have some small changes to make to the character that is in this scene / intro. There is two versions, the intro screen, and then maybe the intro screne after so kinda of animation. Check them out:

Intro:


Another one with Det. Robbins and the SUV:

[kaaZ]

Get rid of the sun...a sun in a background never seems to work out (at least to me) and what happened to the horizon ? anyways I did a real quick edit to point out what could add to the quality of the background in my opinion



I balanced the reds up a bit (alot)...I felt it was a bit to blueish...

Hope this helps a bit...

cheers!

kaaZ

[bytestud10]

Get rid of the sun...a sun in a background never seems to work out (at least to me) and what happened to the horizon ? anyways I did a real quick edit to point out what could add to the quality of the background in my opinion



I balanced the reds up a bit (alot)...I felt it was a bit to blueish...

Hope this helps a bit...

cheers!

kaaZ

Dude, I love it!!! I mean right on the mark, kinda of stuff I was looking for. For sure the touch I was missing... thanks a lot, most for sured I will take this advise and run with it!!!!