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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Ciro Durán on Thu 18/09/2003 04:07:33

Title: Animation C+C
Post by: Ciro Durán on Thu 18/09/2003 04:07:33
Well, here it is...

(http://www.ldc.usb.ve/~ciro/tomate/guardfrontwalk.gif)

(http://www.ldc.usb.ve/~ciro/tomate/guardfrontwalk.gif)
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: Gilbert on Thu 18/09/2003 04:16:37
Looks nice.

2 things that annoyed me are:

1. his tie looks as if it's glued to his shirt

2. his hands are too thin and long (unless that's intended), and when he's walking, they look as if they're just 2 pieces of ropes hanging freely from his body, they should have better strength and can move in larger angles while he's moving.
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: taryuu on Thu 18/09/2003 05:25:12
his arms are friggen huge.  unless you like that look i'd fix it, they're bigger than his legs!  

other than that and what gilbert mentioned it looks smooth, nice work.
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: earlwood on Fri 19/09/2003 22:46:00
ARGG!  8) <double eye patch

Me would like to see a bit o' more detailing and vartations in colors and such of that type. ARGGH!!

Bah, I sound too much like a H4x0r....4 life....

10/\/G 1i\/3 T@1k 1ik3 @ P1r4t3 d@y!!!!!11111!!!!
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Sun 21/09/2003 22:54:35
I kind of like this ... I'm guessing that the tie is supposed to be tucked into his shirt.

The arms do look a little long though ... that was about the only thing that jumped out at me first.

It also looks like he favors one side (a psuedo-limp) because his portly belly only turns one way.  Was that intentionally done?

good work!

dm
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: Ciro Durán on Tue 23/09/2003 00:44:52
Thank you all for your comments, I'm sorry I haven't answered, I'm currently kind of busy with university, in short I had to produce a website in one day :P.

Anyway, I didn't see the thing of the tie, I'll fix that part and short a bit the arms, about what Darth pointed, when I was making the stick animation, I noticed the 'limpness' in the animation, I kinda liked it and got stuck with it.

Expect another C+C in these days :)

Thanks, and bye
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: dagooh on Tue 23/09/2003 07:17:39
I think it looks great, I like the tie tucked in the shirt.
the only thing is that he has girlie arms, if you look at the arms alone the look like they belong to a girl, really  :)
thats the only thing I can notice, the rest is cool (IMO)
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: Ciro Durán on Sat 27/09/2003 01:12:57
Actually, the guard is kinda lazy... here it is a new revision...

(http://www.ldc.usb.ve/~ciro/tomate/guardfrontwalk1.gif)

(http://www.ldc.usb.ve/~ciro/tomate/guardfrontwalk1.gif)
Title: Re:Animation C+C
Post by: subspark on Sat 27/09/2003 02:10:22
Hmmmn the tie still bothers me. Have it sway a bit. He is limping after all so even movement would not be the issue.
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