http://img70.photobucket.com/albums/v212/Largo/Concept/concept1.jpg
What do you think?
Should something be added?
Or should something be removed?
Is something too big/small?
Colored version att soon as I get good color-pencils.
I like this and can't wait to see what you will do with colour.
I'm not sure if that is the head or foot of the bed tho - but you may need to put an end on if you want your char to lay down or it might look funny. I like the wall - it looks like a ghost with a radio strapped to his noggin'.
A very good start.Ã, But like Mr_Frisby posted, can't wait to see it in color.
But the gun on the floor looks huge!!
Quote from: Dark-of-Night on Sun 30/05/2004 00:23:42
A very good start.Ã, But like Mr_Frisby posted, can't wait to see it in color.
But the gun on the floor looks huge!!
It's actually a soft air gun ;)
You're supposed to pick it up, cause you will be needing it in the game.
If you're supposed to pick it up, you'd better remove it and add it as a sprite.
From the complete lack of depth, perspective and proportions I assume that you're fairly young (no offense!) so I won't go into more details now.
A general advice would be to try to clean it up a bit and experiment with the composition to create a more room-like feeling to it.
Perhaps look at some 3-Dimensional drawings, (do a google (http://www.google.com/)), and maybe that will give your picture some more depth. I dunno if this was intended, and if it was I don't particularly like it, is that not everything in life is curved.
Example:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/demoerry.gif)
I whipped this up in 5 min, it's really bad but should give you an idea...