Background concept that need criticism!

[CoffeeBob]

http://img70.photobucket.com/albums/v212/Largo/Concept/concept1.jpg
What do you think?
Should something be added?
Or should something be removed?
Is something too big/small?
Colored version att soon as I get good color-pencils.

[Mr_Frisby]

I like this and can't wait to see what you will do with colour.
I'm not sure if that is the head or foot of the bed tho - but you may need to put an end on if you want your char to lay down or it might look funny. I like the wall - it looks like a ghost with a radio strapped to his noggin'.

[Domino]

A very good start.Ã,  But like Mr_Frisby posted, can't wait to see it in color.

But the gun on the floor looks huge!!

[CoffeeBob]

A very good start.Ã,  But like Mr_Frisby posted, can't wait to see it in color.

But the gun on the floor looks huge!!

It's actually a soft air gun
You're supposed to pick it up, cause you will be needing it in the game.

[Andail]

If you're supposed to pick it up, you'd better remove it and add it as a sprite.

From the complete lack of depth, perspective and proportions I assume that you're fairly young (no offense!) so I won't go into more details now.

A general advice would be to try to clean it up a bit and experiment with the composition to create a more room-like feeling to it.

[Phemar]

Perhaps look at some 3-Dimensional drawings, (do a google), and maybe that will give your picture some more depth. I dunno if this was intended, and if it was I don't particularly like it, is that not everything in life is curved.

Example:


I whipped this up in 5 min, it's really bad but should give you an idea...