C&C on character

[vict0r]

Ait!
-Removed the 566000 useless colors
-Improved his pitiful hands
-Enlargened his biceps
-Made his hair look cool (IMO)

[InCreator]

His hands are still too short.

You're free to either google for photo or look in the mirror: hands reach a bit more than halfway of a thigh, pretty close to the knees, not only pants pockets.

Still, that's a huge step forward, this last edit.
You should also consider making feet (shoes) look right... see my edit for tips.

[Afflict]

Like your character Increator...

Victor your sprite is getting better with every post!
He looks like Sonny Bonds, well to me anyway.

ps: the hands are still bothering me...

[n3tgraph]

Indeed the character is improving a lot!

Now, something that I think could be better:
The arms, they look like he sold his original arms and screwed big strong arms to his body.
They don't fit the rest of the character at this point. I don't really know how to improve this the best way, but it's just something I noticed

[Nikolas]

Hands issue: I think that there are a lot of people with short/small hands. Especially people who are a little short and a little wide backed. I like his hands. What I don't like now is his hair. He looks a little like Elvis...

[Khris]

With a relaxed standing pose, the finger tips are almost exactly at crotch level.

To make the body fit the muscular arms, you could widen his chest to shape it more like a triangle.

[vict0r]

What about now? I think the arms are abit too long now, but what do you think?

[Afflict]

The left arm "Characters Right" should not be same length as the other as he is standing at an angle, judging by the feet.

I think turn the body slightly to adjust to the feet, and narrow his shoulders just a little.
Shoulder width normaly equals 2x head width. or something like that loomis said...

[KrisMacDee]

This is really good!Ã,  :oÃ,  Better than mine, no doubt about that.Ã, 

My crits- 1. His arms look almost connected to his t-shirt. The clothing should be loose on his body. Unless it is meant to be tight.
Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  2.His hair looks like a wig.
Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  Ã,  3. His arms look weird, i.e the way they taper towards the hands.

I hope I helped.

BigmacÃ, 

[Khris]

Here's a paintover:

2x

-adjusted shape of head, shoulders, torso, arms
-reshaded clothing
-changed face & hair

[InCreator]

Haha, it looks like Farlander now!!! 

[vict0r]

err... you usually have your arms that way? and he looks too happy and his eyes are too white ! (and his arms are too thin)

[auhsor]

It's cool to see how the sprite has progressed. The only thing I can suggest now is to add another shade to his face. It stands out too much for me.

[vict0r]

Did some small changes on him(including more shading in the face)

What do you think now?

[Khris]

err... you usually have your arms that way?

Indeed, yes, my arms tend to look like natural, human arms.

and he looks too happy and his eyes are too white ! (and his arms are too thin)

I didn't know that you couldn't handle a paintover/constructive criticism.
It won't happen again. (And I mean that.)

[vict0r]

err... you usually have your arms that way?

Indeed, yes, my arms tend to look like natural, human arms.

and he looks too happy and his eyes are too white ! (and his arms are too thin)

I didn't know that you couldn't handle a paintover/constructive criticism.
It won't happen again. (And I mean that.)

Dont take what im saying too serious Please, continue critisizing And when you are at it, take it with a smile, instead of anger and sarcasm That wont get you anywhere

[Khris]

Right, sorry, guess the s confused me

[vict0r]

No more crits? C'mon people! I need to make it better

[scourge]

his arms are maybe a bit too pointy. Give them shape. Show where the forearms meets the upperarms. Also make the upper arms longer

... unless its your style

[ManicMatt]

I think Khrismuc's hairstyle looks better. (Although it is a modern hairstyle, and looking at your char's t-shirt... is it based in the eighties?)

It's that line on the shirt, very retro.

Other than that, I think it's looks neat!