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Title: Critic background art.
Post by: Dualnames on Fri 23/02/2007 04:31:41

Those are images i made for a new game i'm making called "Dave Dell in LONE CASE"
So i am asking for critique and possible advice on what to fix or add or remove or whatever.

A bar
(http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q53/JustLedZep/bar.jpg)
an entrance to a building
(http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q53/JustLedZep/house.jpg)
The main menu
(http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q53/JustLedZep/menu.jpg)

Title: Re: Critic background art.
Post by: ildu on Fri 23/02/2007 08:44:48

Too much emphasis on lighting effects. But it's original, so I'll allow it.

Title: Re: Critic background art.
Post by: MadReizka on Sat 24/02/2007 00:27:34

The perspective seems to be off, and the colors could be better, as in they seem too "blank" to me. As in blank blue, yellow etc.

And the details in walls and floor could use some work.
I do like the mood and atmosphere those lighteffects bring to the pictures.

Title: Re: Critic background art.
Post by: remminycricket on Sat 24/02/2007 00:48:24

This is just a thought but in the first picture with all the white squares, it'd be cool if all those were picture frames with pictures and stuff inside of them...just a thought, but I also like the lighting effects

Title: Re: Critic background art.
Post by: Dualnames on Sat 24/02/2007 23:48:43

Quote from: remminycricket on Sat 24/02/2007 00:48:24
This is just a thought but in the first picture with all the white squares, it'd be cool if all those were picture frames with pictures and stuff inside of them...just a thought, but I also like the lighting effects

Thanks to all. About you now quotd guy. I wanted them to be photos at the first place. Since this time I am gonna take my time before releasing it i'll try and put some photos.

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