My game is entering its testing stage, so I'd value any feedback! You can find about a hundred screenshots on the main site (http://enterthestory.com), plus a teaser video to give you an idea what it's all about. Please PM me if you're willing to test the whole game.
(http://www.enterthestory.com/images/dante0038_01.jpg)
The test version is complete but lacks polish, and that's where I'm hoping you can come in - suggesting easy improvements, spotting bugs, suggesting more dialog, etc.
I'm trying to keep all the discussion in one place for convenience (http://enterthestory.wordpress.com/2009/07/21/please-post-any-test-results-here/), but if you'd rather post here that's fine. Thanks for reading!
As said on your site, I'd love to beta!!
Following feedback I've made a lot of changes and fixed a lot of bugs and have now uploaded test version 2. (More details) (http://enterthestory.wordpress.com/2009/07/28/test-game-2-now-ready-to-download/) Once again, if anyone is willing to test it I'd be very grateful.
(http://www.enterthestory.com/images/dante0037.jpg)