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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: KristjanMan on Thu 23/03/2006 20:52:05

Title: Evil Monk
Post by: KristjanMan on Thu 23/03/2006 20:52:05
I made this char for no reason and it's no going to be in a game just want c&c on it
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/evilmonk.PNG)

he is supposed to look like a RuneScape monster http://www.runehq.com/RHQMonsterView.php?id=81/
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: Afflict on Thu 23/03/2006 21:03:49
Its beter than the 3d one ;)

Characture him make some more identifying features...
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: DutchMarco on Fri 24/03/2006 11:32:11
His dress needs more detail. His feet are in a very unnatural position. His head is off to one side, without being tilted over to any side (it it's straight up but a few pixels to the side). The hands are too straight, try twisting them (putting a perspective on it).

Hope this helps.
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: lo_res_man on Fri 24/03/2006 17:48:07
Here is a quick edit I did, hope it helps. I relize it has some errors, but I still think its kinda nice.  Used all the same colours as you, but one.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/evil_priest_edit.gif%3Cbr%20/%3E)
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: Corey on Fri 24/03/2006 18:48:26
you could add some shading like progzmax always does.
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: lo_res_man on Fri 24/03/2006 19:25:42
I ain't Progzmax, I am lo res man. Besides it was just a quick edit, and if you don't like it, edit it your self.
( not trying to be rude and all)
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: Nikolas on Fri 24/03/2006 19:44:23
He could be reffereing to someone else you knwo and not you. Just because his post is directly after yours dowesn't necessairly mean that he's talking to you.

He could be tlaking to Kristjianblah blah... sorry
Title: Re: Evil Monk
Post by: lo_res_man on Sat 25/03/2006 00:03:11
ok sorry, but I thought it was directed at me because 1) KristjanMan's IS shaded (somewhat) 2) it was, as you said, right after mine.
sorry :-[