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Title: Feedback for sprite
Post by: on Sat 09/09/2006 21:41:42

Alright, this is my first attempt at making a sprite, so any comments would be welcome.

(http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a33/trumpet_nerd/Emilyfront1.jpg)

Title: Re: Feedback for sprite
Post by: SinSin on Sat 09/09/2006 21:55:57

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/a1n2t3z4/goth.jpg

Quick edit

flattened hair put a little shade on the sleaves
stood her (ahem) at ease as alternative folk dont stand straight
Shortened her body by 1 pixel (coz I'm fussy lol )

Saved as jpg by mistake lost some qualityÃ,Â Ã,Â oops

hope it helps a lil
could do with some mammerys i think

Title: Re: Feedback for sprite
Post by: ManicMatt on Sat 09/09/2006 22:40:39

Isn't that a girl?

Title: Re: Feedback for sprite
Post by: Sylvr on Sat 09/09/2006 23:04:38

It's a girl. Fender is right here telling me so, and I saw her draw it. :) (It's modeled after herself)

Title: Re: Feedback for sprite
Post by: alimpo83 on Sun 10/09/2006 11:21:08

I made this in less than 5 minutes, so don't mind the colors and so. I just gave the sprite a "fresh" look I think. It keeps the same feeling, yet in a lighter look.

(http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/6107/522/1600/gothgirl.jpg)

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