Sci-Fi Background (sketch stage)

[Gregjazz]

Wow, this has really come a long way.

The camera angle is much more dynamic and visually interesting. Great work!

[Stupot]

I'd have settled for the first one... but I guess thats why you're a genius and I'm not.
Great stuff

[Sean]

Loving what you have so far, I really like the new angle makes for a much more dynamic and engaging background. Great work, and some really great critique so far

My only nit-pick concerns the somewhat "lifeless" feel the lighting adds to the room. If that's what you're going for, it works well but I personally think the whole thing's a bit on the 'flat' side. Of course, this is my under qualified opinion and my art sucks.

My cocern is that your two-tone lighting scheme takes away some of the 'magic' of the room. I think if you added more colour to the image it might add a little more 'feeling' to everything.

Here is a rough (and awful) visual re-gurgatation of what it is I'm trying to suggest you experiment with. A more varied range of colour.






I'm aware my edit kills the mood of the background as a whole, but I think that's mainly because it's a messy edit more than anything else. I think if you experiment a little more, and try adding a little more colour you may end up with a nicer piece.

I'd like to note, that I'm in total awe of your work so far and I will take this opportunity to apologize for butchering you're fine art with my amateurish edit Just trying to convey an idea... hope to see more from you soon! Love the style

[Blue]

I like Sean's idea with adding some colors to the image.
I gave it a shot as well. (Looks horrible but what the heck  )



..But I still love the original concept. It rocks!