First Charcter: Help with Espri

[Szdfan]

Hi,

I'm designing a game that takes place around the turn of the last century.Ã, 

While I'm for the most part pleased with Espri, I need some advice regarding her dress and blouse.Ã,  I think both are pretty blah and not very interesting (though the choker on the blouse helps].



Does anyone have any advice regarding folds and shadows or anything else that may "jazz" up her clothing?

Paint overs are of course welcome.

Many thanks.

[Jay]

Hi,

Espri is m

Couldn't have said it better myself.

[Evil]

Hmm, could use a period. Other then that it looks ok.

[MrColossal]

I take it you accidentally hit post when the post wasn't even done yet.

Edit the post by clicking modify at the top of it and all will be well

[Szdfan]

You guys are fast.Ã, 

I accidentally hit post and in the time it took me to fix it, already the responses...anyway it has been fixed above, except that the gif format moved the whites of the eyes over a tad and there is a white spot on her face and hand that was okay on the gif file on my computer.

Would it be better to post in something other than gif?

UPDATE 9/4: I don't know what's up but from my work computer the graphic shows up fine.Ã,  Anyway, I look forward to your criticisms and suggestions.Ã,