how can i improve my background?

[Ali]

The outlines look excellent, not using black outlines gives the picture a really nice feel. The games/DVDs on the shelf look very nice.

Evil is right about the bed. If I hold my finger over the end of it, the pespective looks fine.Ã,  We should be able to see much less of the end, it should be at a sharper angle to the camera.

[1,000 hours]

yeah I think your right I'll change the end bit of the bed

[1,000 hours]

did that do the trick?

[Tiki]

I think you still need to get rid of that poster.  Either draw one yourself, of think of something else to fill up that wall, because it looks very out of place.

[1,000 hours]

ok i'm on it.