So I'm sitting in an I.T room during my free period surrounded by a class of screaming year 8's (fun for all ¬_¬).Ã, Loading up paint I drew this:
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/shi.png)
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/shibig.png)
(perspective point left in as its DAMN HARD TO CONCENTRATE SURROUNDED BY 13 YEAR OLD CHAVS!!Ã, :P)
Might make a game using this setting.
Mmmm... I am not sure. Is this a timekiller? So, do you need help or crits or what? The line between the two yellow doors and the "bulge" upper wall do not reach the vanishing point propperly... Apart from that, looks cool.
Sorry, I forgot to say, yes, does anyone have an suggestions on how to improve it? Apart from the tech errors (the out of place line doesn't match up cos some ass deleted the persp cross saying "I made it look better now") And I had to find it again to do the lines on the wall.
I personally dont like the sun that much, and any help or pointers on how to make it look better would be appreciated. The Clouds are a bit flat as well but they dont look that bad I guess.
a paintover:
I took the sun out and played with the clouds some, gave them a bit of shape. I edited the windows (?) to reflect the sky a bit.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/clueypaintover.png)