Feedback for sprite

[Fender]

Alright, this is my first attempt at making a sprite, so any comments would be welcome.

[SinSin]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/a1n2t3z4/goth.jpg

Quick edit

flattened hair put a little shade on the sleaves
stood her (ahem) at ease as alternative folk dont stand straight
Shortened her body by 1 pixel (coz I'm fussy lol )

Saved as jpg by mistake lost some qualityÃ,  Ã,  oops

hope it helps a lil
could do with some mammerys i think

[ManicMatt]

Isn't that a girl?

[Sylvr]

It's a girl. Fender is right here telling me so, and I saw her draw it. (It's modeled after herself)

[alimpo83]

I made this in less than 5 minutes, so don't mind the colors and so. I just gave the sprite a "fresh" look I think. It keeps the same feeling, yet in a lighter look.