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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Jimi on Sat 10/07/2004 20:05:32

Title: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Jimi on Sat 10/07/2004 20:05:32
I've just finished this forward walkcycle, could you give me some c+c please? I used erics template as a guide  ;D

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/walkdown.gif)

Thanks, Jim.
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Peefy on Sat 10/07/2004 23:38:26
Awesome animation!
After looking a while to see if I could find something to complain on, I found something.
His legs seems flat on the sides or bottom in some of the frames, probably because the image size were to small or something..I guess >_>
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: NaStY_FrEaK on Sun 11/07/2004 12:44:45
Really Great! ;D
Thought there is no what to critique ,but there is.
I think that his hair should also move upside down,because of his hairstyle.
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Jimi on Sun 11/07/2004 18:49:38
Peefy, could you elaborate on that please?  :D
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Peefy on Sun 11/07/2004 22:22:07
Forget it, only me beeing way to tired to think, sorry.
It's awesome =D
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: BerserkerTails on Sun 11/07/2004 23:43:13
It's good. Nice use of Eric's template.
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: strazer on Mon 12/07/2004 18:21:15
The black line between his upper arm and the torso suddenly skips inward one pixel in one of the frames (and the one for the other side).
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Phemar on Mon 12/07/2004 19:23:56

I noticed an error, it's not your fault as it was in Eric's too.
The legs go back, the kinda snap forward, this is prolly for a reason, but i don't feel like thinking 'cos Frasiers coming on now.
Cheers
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Renal Shutdown on Tue 13/07/2004 08:31:14
I'm with strazer, here.  It looks like he has very small but very wobbly breasts.
Title: Re: Need C&C for walkcycle
Post by: Jimi on Tue 13/07/2004 22:00:22
lol. He's been letting himself go lately  ;) . I'll try and fix that. Thanks.