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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: ChestPecRespect on Thu 30/10/2014 03:26:58

Title: Need Comments on Sprite
Post by: ChestPecRespect on Thu 30/10/2014 03:26:58
Hey guys. I'm looking to make my first AGS game and I need comments on this Sprite I'm currently making.

(http://s28.postimg.org/m5say08zt/TAsprite_Large.jpg) (http://postimg.org/image/m5say08zt/)
By the way, this is a thumbnail. Click to zoom and view back and side (unfinished) shots.

He's supposed to have the left side of his face swollen from a toothache but I can't quite get it to look like that.
He's about 100 pixels tall. Is this the right size to make your average character?
Any suggestions?
Title: Re: Need Comments on Sprite
Post by: selmiak on Thu 30/10/2014 07:49:21
what does he look like facing left?
I like the feet! Not sure about the face and the growth on it...
Title: Re: Need Comments on Sprite
Post by: ChestPecRespect on Thu 30/10/2014 09:08:45
I'm working on the legs of the "facing right" view first then I'll mirror it and do the appropriate changes later.
I don't like the look of the feet in the "back" view though. And I think I'll change that thing on his face to stripes or something to emphasize swelling.
Thanks for the feedback.