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Title: Need crits on this song.
Post by: Peder 🚀 on Thu 31/08/2006 22:42:48

Hey, I made a song today for a one room game I might make.

Just needs some opinions on what I could do with it :P.

http://arnjeir.borgarholt.info/Peder%20Johnsen%20-%20THE%20GAME.mp3

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: on Fri 01/09/2006 00:17:06

It sounds very wistful, something about sadness and loss maybe?

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: T_ed89 on Fri 01/09/2006 15:15:19

This is an absolutly excellent tune just the way it is. It's hard to give any more crits when I don't know what kind of theme you're aiming at.

If it was a sad, calm background melody you wanted, you aimed perfectly, however, I think it could work as a intro or menu song too.

Great song man :o

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: Peder 🚀 on Fri 01/09/2006 16:27:14

Thanks for comments.

Yeah, it was supposed to have a sad theme.

and its meant to be background music just to give the game some more, as I think music gives a game more life.

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: Nikolas on Fri 01/09/2006 17:19:21

It's a very intense and deep song. I like it a lot.

The only thing is that it is a little repeatative. Not exactly a bad thing, but it may grow a little tiresome after 2-3 loops for someone who's stuck in a room, for example.

A middle section might save it. Not that it needs saving though as it is very nice as I said. Just a thought...

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: Peder 🚀 on Fri 01/09/2006 17:30:43

Thanks for feedback Nikolas and finally some comments I was looking for!!

hehe :P.

I will try something out as you suggested.

and Thanks again!

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: MadReizka on Mon 04/09/2006 13:35:53

It made me depressed. I think that is a pretty good mark for a good song. :)

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: ManicMatt on Mon 04/09/2006 17:13:53

That's strange, I listened to this a few days back and somehow never commented!

This song sounds to me like a cutscene song, where people are having a sad conversation, or something bad happened and they're feeling the sorrow.

It be nice!

Title: Re: Need crits on this song.
Post by: Peder 🚀 on Tue 05/09/2006 18:01:12

Thanks for comments ;D.

As the secret project I got with a friend is more important than any other projects I got going (music, games whatever) I have decided to concentrate on the secret project instead..

so this will not be used for a short game after all.
But I might use it later for another game if I decide to make one myself :).

So as you say ManicMatt, it might become a cutscene song instead!

I got some other songs I am making, and I still got to work some more on this, so might post it here to get crits on them.

Its allways helpfull hearing other peoples opinions!

Thanks,
Peder Johnsen.

Adventure Game Studio

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