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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Armageddon on Tue 08/03/2011 05:18:38

Title: Pancake day
Post by: Armageddon on Tue 08/03/2011 05:18:38
Hey, what do you think of my pancakes?

1x: (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5479044/Pancake_Day.png)

2x: (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5479044/Pancake_Day_x2.png)

It's an inventory and world item so... I know the text is messed up.
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Tue 08/03/2011 13:34:13
Err...Well...
They look good? :-D
Not much to comment on :-D
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Anian on Tue 08/03/2011 14:41:59
The middle of the batch is kind of too busy, like there are too many random pixels of different color. It's not that it looks bad though.
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: WHAM on Tue 08/03/2011 15:57:51
I got a sudden craving for pancakes...
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Ponch on Tue 08/03/2011 16:27:57
Quote from: WHAM on Tue 08/03/2011 15:57:51
I got a sudden craving for pancakes...
Me too! So +1 to those pancakes. They're pancakey enough to make me hungry for pancakes! :D
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Moresco on Tue 08/03/2011 17:42:10
We had pancakes for breakfast when this post showed up.  Sadly, I think the pancakes in your graphic look better than ours did!
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Armageddon on Tue 08/03/2011 20:39:29
Thanks all. I think the plate looks a little too V-shaped now that I look at it. I'll try and fix up the stack a bit.

Also I made this dude. I think his face is terrible.

1x: (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5479044/Jones.png)

2x: (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5479044/Jones_x2.png)
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Ali on Tue 08/03/2011 21:59:02
Are you working on some kind of Pancake Day Massacre adventure noir? Because I would play that!
Title: Re: Pancake day
Post by: Tabata on Wed 09/03/2011 22:50:15
How about if the gray dark stubble would be darker (he doesen't seem having the age for a grey beard)? You should be able to give the face more contrast with this.

There he stands, very casual and as if any moment he begins to move.

Cool -  8)