First Attempt at my character

[bytestud10]

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Well posted below is the first attempt at my first main characters, body only! I have not done the head or feet. Just wanted to get some feedback on what I have so far.

First is 60x60:
http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins.jpg

and the next one is a 400% increase (or 300x300)
http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins_400.jpg

So please give me some feedback, and also what is the normal Sprite size of a character in a 320x260 Game?

PS. I am going for a semi-update Police Quest II or III style game.

[Moox]

the right shoulders a little off, other than that, good job

[bytestud10]

the right shoulders a little off, other than that, good job

I see what you are talking about. Let me fix it and add a head and feet and re-post!

[bytestud10]

Ok so here is the first full character. I know it needs some work, so some C&C is wanted. Please also give tips as to how to improve??!!!

60X80:


and then 400% increase:


thanks in advance!

P.S. I know the face needs works, he looks to happy to be a 35-40 year old Decetive... but like I said, at least it is a start.

[Moox]

hmm the smile looks clownish, maybe sun glasses and a straight mouth

[Paper Carnival]

He's great, but I don't like his face. It's too happy

[bytestud10]

He's great, but I don't like his face. It's too happy

Your right. I am going to fix his face, maybe put on some glasses. He is a detective.

[Valzebnik]

The hands should be longer! Only a little bit.A very fine way to test this is that u stand up and see how u look and mesure bodyparts with ur eyes.Then its easyer to do that on the comp!