Three backgrounds....

Started by plebeo, Fri 24/06/2005 20:05:55

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plebeo

Hi everybody!!!

I want to show you three backgrounds created by three guys of our little italian community of adventure developing.

You can See the backgrounds here: http://www.forumfree.net/?t=3898493

If you want give opinions, suggestions, everything you want!!




Jay

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Privateer Puddin'

are these for the same game? they're in quite different styles (the first 2 are quite similar though)

plebeo

Quote from: Privateer Puddin' on Fri 24/06/2005 21:26:37
are these for the same game? they're in quite different styles (the first 2 are quite similar though)

No!
They are different backgrounds for different (ipotetic) adventures!!!

Paper Carnival

The first is awesome, not many details but still full. I don't have anything to suggest for that, it has a great style!

The second is also nice, but I see a mistake with the perspective of the walls. It's also kinda empty and the grass & ground textures aren't as good as they could. Maybe it needs more details, but it's still nice. The problem is that it looks "empty". I like the tree a lot, but the left branch looks kinda weird - the leftest part should be on the back instead of on the front.

The third is good, but it doesn't fit for a playable room. The rocks, castle and sky are simply brilliant, but the grass (and maybe the trees) kinda ruins it. The trees also don't seem like they come from the ground. And also, I think it's too foggy

LGM

Quote from: plebeo on Fri 24/06/2005 21:39:31
No!
They are different backgrounds for different (ipotetic) adventures!!!

Whoa whoa, no need to get angry.
You. Me. Denny's.

plebeo

Quote from: [lgm] on Sat 25/06/2005 19:22:01
Quote from: plebeo on Fri 24/06/2005 21:39:31
No!
They are different backgrounds for different (ipotetic) adventures!!!

Whoa whoa, no need to get angry.

?? ???
I wasn't angry!!

Abisso

The third one sucks, but the others are nice.

;D

Just a joke Plebeo, I know that the last one is yours! And you know who I am!
Welcome back to the age of the great guilds.

plebeo

Eh eh!!

Hi Abisso!!

Thanks for posting!!Ã,  :D

PS: sorry to everybody if it seems I was angry!!

yourhumblecartoonist

I love the first background, and I think if the same shading techniques were applied to the second (plus the minor perspective correction) it would do it a world of good. 
As for the third; somebody said:

QuoteThe rocks, castle and sky are simply brilliant, but the grass (and maybe the trees) kinda ruins it. The trees also don't seem like they come from the ground.

Maybe if the grass were to come up a little bit near the base of the trees it would solve both of those problems?

ErinLeigh

I love the shading techniques you used in the first background.. very nice.Ã,  I agree with the others that the second could be just as impressive with the perspective fixes done to the wall and the same shading techniques applied.Ã,  I'm really impressed with your work.. great job!

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