Midi for C+C

[PsychicHeart]

I've been experimenting with Techno-ish sort of rythms and this is the fruition, "Cloud Keeper"(how's the name?)
Here it is: http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cloud_Keeper.mid

The bass instrument is Synth Bass.
The instrument used very slightly and only at the beginning is a Synth Drum,
and the other instrument is a Rhodes Piano.
Cheers,
Fb.

[[Cameron]]

With the name Cloud Keeper I would have expected something a tad more dreamy. It's a minor issue but I think with that name and having a more dreamy sound would be effective. Just a minor change of instrument.

Also I'd suggest having a stronger beat, instead of what sounds like a kick that varies in pitch a little (I'm assuming thats what it ws) Something a bit more developed in sound could help. Even with a simple beat such as this:
http://media.putfile.com/Cloud-Keeper

[Paper Carnival]

I suggest you do something about the rhythm. It's all quarter after quarter and that can be boring, especially at the beginning when the bass is playing alone.

I attempted a quick edit, it's not good but maybe you'll see what I mean:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/flukedit.mid

You don't really have to use more notes like I did, but I guess just a different rhythm (like, maybe, quarter-eights-quarter-eights) would be better