Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: PsychicHeart on Tue 05/07/2005 06:54:24

Title: Logo for game - critique needed
Post by: PsychicHeart on Tue 05/07/2005 06:54:24
hey,
my game is basically a car modification game. One of the garages in called Champion Mods, and here is a logo for it. I know that the text is a little too big to fit inside the trophy, but are there any other disadvantages?

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/championmodslogoforreadme.GIF)

cheers
Title: Re: Logo for game - critique needed
Post by: Phemar on Tue 05/07/2005 06:58:34

Well your lines are extremely wonky and the text doesn't fit inside the cup.

Perhaps try to implement some form of shading too.
Title: Re: Logo for game - critique needed
Post by: Gilbert on Tue 05/07/2005 07:25:41
An advice, unless you had mastered mouse control, or you own a tablet, try using the line or curve tools more than just using freehand.
For example, the following is just something quickly mucked up using the line tool with M$Pain (personally I don't like using curve tools):
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/cmodsgc.png)
Title: Re: Logo for game - critique needed
Post by: PsychicHeart on Tue 05/07/2005 08:33:55
aye carumba! that beats the shit out of what i did!
Title: Re: Logo for game - critique needed
Post by: Andail on Tue 05/07/2005 10:42:49
For crying out loud, I've said it before; This isn't kindergarten.
This is disrespectful to our art community.