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Title: New art ._. k
Post by: OneThinkingGal and ._. on 20 Apr 2003, 04:23
(http://theloft.asp-world.co.uk/art/anotherface3.png)


Oh yeah, eyes have that empty look intentionally.

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Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: Evil on 20 Apr 2003, 04:33
nice... i am gonna wait for an "it's a giant lens flare" post. it is very highlighted... good work tho...
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: OneThinkingGal and ._. on 20 Apr 2003, 04:36
The highlighting is the whole point. :D

Ugh, no lens flare ^_^ that's 100% manual shading.
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: auhsor on 20 Apr 2003, 05:25
pretty cool pic.

comments: the shading on her left arm is a bit too much, and the stripes(shading) on her shirt seem a bit bright. They stand out (unless they're suposed to).

Also there looks like there is not much of a nose (but you may have wanted it like that)
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: Neole on 20 Apr 2003, 09:31
My only problem is the nose. From a front view drawing the lower part of the nose is more important than the vertical part, I think.
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: Eggie on 20 Apr 2003, 11:13
Nice. I like the whole overlapping colouring style.
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: OneThinkingGal and ._. on 20 Apr 2003, 14:28
Thanks. :)  Actually, I  did try drawing a nose, but it seemed to take over the face pretty much and mess up the expression I was going for. ._.

Shading on the shirt, I agree it should be turned down a bit. :) I'll adjust it.
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: Rincewind on 20 Apr 2003, 14:38
Yes, very nice. I really like your style, but as said previously: The nose needs a fix... ;D
Great work!
Title: Re:New art ._. k
Post by: Igor on 20 Apr 2003, 15:54
Cute drawing! I realy like its sketchy feel.
My minor complaint would be that lines look a bit too insecure. I would add another stroger and cleaner shape above sketchy lines to better describe the figure. Other than that, it's great :)